Fog
Limbo in mist4 total reviews
Comment from seaglass
I find this rhyming pattern very interesting. I can't pretend to understand the meaning of the poem but the pattern of rhyming only the last word in the first line with the last word in the fourth, while no others rhyme, is unique. I had to read it several times to figure out hos it was rhyming.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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I find this rhyming pattern very interesting. I can't pretend to understand the meaning of the poem but the pattern of rhyming only the last word in the first line with the last word in the fourth, while no others rhyme, is unique. I had to read it several times to figure out hos it was rhyming.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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Hi seaglass ,
thanks for the cool thoughts and review.
I really appreciate the effort spent in review.
cheers
grant
Comment from Kingsland
Some times we need to feel pain to know that we're alive. I liked the emotions you have written into this poetic thought process. This was a well written and I was entertained while reading it... John
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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Some times we need to feel pain to know that we're alive. I liked the emotions you have written into this poetic thought process. This was a well written and I was entertained while reading it... John
Comment Written 06-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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Hey there John,
great to see you again mate. (been a long time )
Thanks for your patronage and the time spent leaving your thoughts.
cheers
grant
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
Oh Mr. Grunty it is always a pleasure to see your name and your glorious muse come to visit. I love the way this one flows and how you laid it out. I was stumbling a bit on in hope to quest of why...not sure that is exactly worded right but can't seem to find any other way. I think it is the of why, maybe I hear the way. I don't know. Love the poem though, always you have that tingle of hurt. Wish that would go away love.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Oh Mr. Grunty it is always a pleasure to see your name and your glorious muse come to visit. I love the way this one flows and how you laid it out. I was stumbling a bit on in hope to quest of why...not sure that is exactly worded right but can't seem to find any other way. I think it is the of why, maybe I hear the way. I don't know. Love the poem though, always you have that tingle of hurt. Wish that would go away love.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Hey hon,
great to see you!
Thanks for having a look my friend. x
hugs
grant
Comment from Visheshta Dahiya
a great poem on fog..!!
the simple and apt words through out the poem make the poem very interesting
best wishes
Visheshta
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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a great poem on fog..!!
the simple and apt words through out the poem make the poem very interesting
best wishes
Visheshta
Comment Written 06-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Hi there Visheshta,
thanks for the review!
It is appreciated.
cheers
Grant
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welcome :)
