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They Named Him Alexander

rhyming quatrains

178 total reviews 
Comment from simplyteresa
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Your poems are always such a delight and I seeing the picture of Sawyer has made me miss FS. After just an hour of catching up I feel I have missed so much.
I truly enjoyed your poem and indeed two is almost as bad as 18.
Smiles,
Teresa

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
    Teresa, thank you so much :-) Oh, 18, I'm not prepared for that one yet. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from Showboat
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Hi Brooke, what a hoot! His expression is just a riot and boy, are you right about the terrible twos. Can't win.

Also, congrats on your win with Leonidas. Another real cutie. Thank you for sharing that little doll with us,

Hugs,
Gayle

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
    Thanks so much, Gayle. Yes, at 22 months he is showing his spirit in ways that are sometimes trying! Thanks also for your kind contest congratulations :-) Brooke
Comment from crookedtoes
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I think I'll give you six for this, though "to me" the photo looks just a little bit grainy. I really like how your poems always seem to flow and rhyme nicely. You're right, two year old's can sometimes try a persons patience, of which...he might need a good spanking. Dean

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
    Dean, thank you. The photo was taken with a cell phone camera :-)
    I appreciate your generous response to the poem. Brooke
reply by crookedtoes on 06-Mar-2014
    NO...Thank You!! And yes, you're welcome. Dean
Comment from Visheshta Dahiya
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a lovely and a really cute poem.
i loved it and while reading the dinner part i could relate myself with the words because despite my being 17, she still scolds me for the dinner.
the rhyme scheme is lovely and the words are really interesting and sweet.
an adorable poem :)
best wishes
Visheshta

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
    Visheshta, thank you so much :-) Brooke
reply by Visheshta Dahiya on 06-Mar-2014
    welcome :)
Comment from Sarah Butterfly
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Amusing poem to read Brooke. Very good rhyme used through the fluently written and unforced stanzas. Very enjoyable!
Kind regards

Sarah

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
    Thanks so very much, Sarah :-) I appreciate your gracious review and generous sixth star. Brooke
Comment from 3boysrule
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LOL! I laughed at this one! Even when they turn 15 - sometimes the fight of wills goes absolutely nowhere. Great job Brooke!
Dee

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
    Dee, thanks so much :-) Moms are bound to have a special appreciation of this situation. LOL Brooke
Comment from rouskin
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Cute picture , enjoyable read and clear message :The moral of this story --no matter what you do,you'll never win a fight of wills if your opponent's two.
Thank you for sharing and have a great day

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
    Thank you so much, rouskin :-) Brooke
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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The moral of this story --
no matter what you do,
you'll never win a fight of wills
if your opponent's two.

Ha ha - what a look! He's showing a will of his own -- I'd have to walk away in case I laughed. You always manage to create a great poem for the photo - I applaud you, my friend.

Margaret

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
    Margaret, I was always like that with Sawyer's mom - it was so hard to discipline her because she was too damned cute. LOL Thanks so much for your review. Brooke
Comment from smudge
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A brilliant poem. I am just experiencing the flinging of things from two two year great grandchildren. One about to fling himself on the floor. I said, "Don't do that you might miss something!" I was shocked when he stopped.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
    smudge, thank you so very much for the laugh and the review :-) Brooke
Comment from visionary1234
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Unfortunately, not only did I lose my battle with my TWO year old son ... I haven't improved in the winning game at ALL and he's now SEVENTEEN! He doesn't pout or frown - he simply picks me up ... or ... I yell at his kneecaps! Delightful Brooke! :)S

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
    Sharyn, LOL :-) Thanks for the laugh and for the review :-) Brooke