A Book For The Face
In the matrix of life and the masks we were2 total reviews
Comment from mumsyone
Oops! Your poem is not a 5-7-5. The 5-7-5 requires three lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables (not words). I hope you can fix it so that it qualifies for the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Oops! Your poem is not a 5-7-5. The 5-7-5 requires three lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables (not words). I hope you can fix it so that it qualifies for the contest.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Hi, don't think I want to change it or it can be fixed, maybe tell me of other free contests, that suite my poem. thanks
Comment from tfawcus
I think you are right. Our journey through life leaves a roadmap on our faces. There is such incredible beauty in the faces of some old people. I loved your lines:
"Maybe it is true.. that the road is for the journey.. not the destination..
And all we have to do.. is travel with a passion.."
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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I think you are right. Our journey through life leaves a roadmap on our faces. There is such incredible beauty in the faces of some old people. I loved your lines:
"Maybe it is true.. that the road is for the journey.. not the destination..
And all we have to do.. is travel with a passion.."
Comment Written 03-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Thanks for your nice comment.
