The Devil by Firelight, pt 12
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Comment from JSD
No picture, again. Excellent ending. The prayer works so well. Do't forget that the plural of Shay does not need an apostrophe! But have a cumulative 6 for writing such a gripping and brilliant story. So glad it ended happily. x
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2023
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No picture, again. Excellent ending. The prayer works so well. Do't forget that the plural of Shay does not need an apostrophe! But have a cumulative 6 for writing such a gripping and brilliant story. So glad it ended happily. x
Comment Written 23-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much. And thank you for the edit. Very helpful and appreciated. Gretchen
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Gretchen,
this story was outstanding. You're a master story teller gal. Well done! I enjoyed the fact that you wove into your story the fact that Jenny was a Christian girl struggling to balance what she had been taught about the bible versus the reality of the evil she was confronted with. It was a great read. Thanks for sharing this.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Hello Gretchen,
this story was outstanding. You're a master story teller gal. Well done! I enjoyed the fact that you wove into your story the fact that Jenny was a Christian girl struggling to balance what she had been taught about the bible versus the reality of the evil she was confronted with. It was a great read. Thanks for sharing this.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 22-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much. I'm so happy you liked this. Thank you for the stars as well. Gretchen
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful ending. Poor Jeremy and Jenny. Is Patrick dead? I guess so because he wasn't taken to the hospital. I hope Jenny and Jeremy can move on from their traumatic experience. We'll done!
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Wonderful ending. Poor Jeremy and Jenny. Is Patrick dead? I guess so because he wasn't taken to the hospital. I hope Jenny and Jeremy can move on from their traumatic experience. We'll done!
Comment Written 22-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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I don't know whether Patrick is dead or alive. Thank you so much for thos special review and wonderful rating. Gretchen
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was such a lovely, satisfying ending, Gretchen. I was so pleased to see the brothers get their cummupance. This was quite a story, and you handled it masterfully. This makes it four stories I've read of yours now, all different, and all fabulous. I would like to get hold of the first Miranda book, then I can read the second book. Well done, my clever friend! :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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That was such a lovely, satisfying ending, Gretchen. I was so pleased to see the brothers get their cummupance. This was quite a story, and you handled it masterfully. This makes it four stories I've read of yours now, all different, and all fabulous. I would like to get hold of the first Miranda book, then I can read the second book. Well done, my clever friend! :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 22-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Thank you Sandra. I'd love for you to read Miranda Chronicles. Either in my portfolio or it's on Amazon. I'd appreciate your feedback. Gretchen. Oh, thank you so much for the six also.
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Hi, Gretchen, I've tried to get your book on Amazon, but it's not there, only this one...
Plagued: The Miranda Chronicles Vol 1 ; (Plagued, 1)
by Gary Chudleigh and Tanya Roberts.
Can you take a look and give me the link? I'd like to read it on my Kindle, then I can catch with the second book. And you deserved the six! xx
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Miranda Chronicles: Hargis, Gretchen W. - Amazon.com https://www.amazon.com/Miranda-Chronicles-Gretchen-W-Hargis/dp/B0C12JSN71
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I'm not great with computers hope this was the right thing. It's Miranda Chronicles. No "the" in title. And thank you again. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I've enjoyed every chapter of this story but went all week without enough stars to reward any of the first nine or ten chapters deservingly. But thankfully, I do have one for this chapter. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Well, I've enjoyed every chapter of this story but went all week without enough stars to reward any of the first nine or ten chapters deservingly. But thankfully, I do have one for this chapter. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
This has really been some drama and stark reality in some places, like it could have really happened in some areas. You certainly have a talent for all kinds of fiction writing. Well done. Wish you well.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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This has really been some drama and stark reality in some places, like it could have really happened in some areas. You certainly have a talent for all kinds of fiction writing. Well done. Wish you well.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
A six for the whole series. Couldn't give one for each chapter. I enjoyed the read even though it was a hard and dark one. Well done.
Wendy
Shays (plural) does not need an apostrophe as it is not an abbreviation nor a possessive.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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A six for the whole series. Couldn't give one for each chapter. I enjoyed the read even though it was a hard and dark one. Well done.
Wendy
Shays (plural) does not need an apostrophe as it is not an abbreviation nor a possessive.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much, Wendy. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This was a perfect ending to the horror, although I still wonder if Fen did the killing, or his brother did it and made him say he did it. Jenny was incredibly strong for someone so young. Have you ever looked at Cricket Publishing? They do young adult books, although I don't know much about them.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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This was a perfect ending to the horror, although I still wonder if Fen did the killing, or his brother did it and made him say he did it. Jenny was incredibly strong for someone so young. Have you ever looked at Cricket Publishing? They do young adult books, although I don't know much about them.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Have never heard of them but will Google Cricket to see what's up. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
I'm actually glad I read this story, I don't know whether you dimmed down the story a little to make sure it wasn't too horrific, and I'm sorry I doubted, I think this would have made an excellent film. This is great, the surprise was that Fin had killed a man. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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I'm actually glad I read this story, I don't know whether you dimmed down the story a little to make sure it wasn't too horrific, and I'm sorry I doubted, I think this would have made an excellent film. This is great, the surprise was that Fin had killed a man. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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It was rough but I love good versus evil. The moral dilemma. Saying you're a good person and proving it are two different things. Thank you for sticking with me. I really appreciate it. Gretchen
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Well done
Comment from damommy
I don't see a picture. I'm glad her signal on the roof was seen. A big surprise to find out they considered Fin the most dangerous. I guess he wasn't so bad because he liked Jenny.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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I don't see a picture. I'm glad her signal on the roof was seen. A big surprise to find out they considered Fin the most dangerous. I guess he wasn't so bad because he liked Jenny.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Fin realizes he made a mistake. But Patrick always justifies what he does. Thank you for this. Gretchen
