Hurt Feelings
Words are like weapons48 total reviews
Comment from Selina Stambi
This is such a powerful little piece speaking profound truth.
The power of words cannot be underestimated. I still remember negative words spoken at me when I was a child ... the memory still makes me cry sometimes.
All the best in the contest, Judith. I don't think I've bumped into you before. Nice to meet you. :)
xxx
Sonali
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014
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This is such a powerful little piece speaking profound truth.
The power of words cannot be underestimated. I still remember negative words spoken at me when I was a child ... the memory still makes me cry sometimes.
All the best in the contest, Judith. I don't think I've bumped into you before. Nice to meet you. :)
xxx
Sonali
Comment Written 03-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014
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Thank you for such a nice review of my work
Comment from tfawcus
The best 5-7-5 I've read in a long time. Such a powerful use of the form. Such a great truth held in these few short lines. What we scratch on the mind of that newly formed surface remains indelible. As indelible, in fact, as the names I scratched in an antique dining table years ago so that everyone would know where to sit. I got a five and a seven for that! Probably six of the best too!:)
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014
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The best 5-7-5 I've read in a long time. Such a powerful use of the form. Such a great truth held in these few short lines. What we scratch on the mind of that newly formed surface remains indelible. As indelible, in fact, as the names I scratched in an antique dining table years ago so that everyone would know where to sit. I got a five and a seven for that! Probably six of the best too!:)
Comment Written 03-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind words and such a nice review of my worl
Comment from Acquired Taste
I grew up in a household where it was common occurrence to hurl those words. IT is a tragedy that is not understood until later in life.
This is an emotional 5-7-5 and your photo is perfect for your entry. Best of luck. AT=/
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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I grew up in a household where it was common occurrence to hurl those words. IT is a tragedy that is not understood until later in life.
This is an emotional 5-7-5 and your photo is perfect for your entry. Best of luck. AT=/
Comment Written 03-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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thank you for the kind review of my work
Comment from victor 66
The mistakes we make with children, especially in their early years, it's a wonder how many still turn out pretty well. Enjoyed your poem very much. It really rang true. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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The mistakes we make with children, especially in their early years, it's a wonder how many still turn out pretty well. Enjoyed your poem very much. It really rang true. Best wishes.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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thank you for the kind review of my work
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You are welcome.
Comment from Patti R.
Your syllable count is spot on for this 5-7-5 contest.
However, I understand the contest intended for the writer to 'have a little fun'. Wow, your poem is terribly sad, for me it doesn't fit with the theme.
(judgemental)
Patti
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Your syllable count is spot on for this 5-7-5 contest.
However, I understand the contest intended for the writer to 'have a little fun'. Wow, your poem is terribly sad, for me it doesn't fit with the theme.
(judgemental)
Patti
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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I read it to mean fun with the work and not pf the content .
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and revue.
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Hi Judith, what does 'pf' mean?
And you are right; how can I presume to know what is defined as fun by someone I have never met.
Comment from Gungalo
Five judgmental words
or seven hurled in anger
child lost forever
It's so true. Words can severely harm a child if they are not properly monitored.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Five judgmental words
or seven hurled in anger
child lost forever
It's so true. Words can severely harm a child if they are not properly monitored.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
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Smile.
Comment from Adri7enne
Yes, well done. A play on the 5-7-5 count included in the poem. Sorta fun! It all holds together well, with the picture with the big tears. Poor little tyke. Children are so dependant on their caretakers for so long. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Yes, well done. A play on the 5-7-5 count included in the poem. Sorta fun! It all holds together well, with the picture with the big tears. Poor little tyke. Children are so dependant on their caretakers for so long. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you for such a kind review of my work
Comment from padumachitta
Hello. Words are actions as surely as your arms and fists. This is a sad but true 5 7 5 ...I keep wondering what the words were...I don't love you anymore...you're a terrible little boy..it matters not, in the end
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Hello. Words are actions as surely as your arms and fists. This is a sad but true 5 7 5 ...I keep wondering what the words were...I don't love you anymore...you're a terrible little boy..it matters not, in the end
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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thank you for taking the time to read and review my work
Comment from judiverse
What you say is so true. Hurtful words can damage a child, just as physical abuse does. They can easily turn a child against the parent. Sometimes adults are victims of verbal abuse from their spouses, too. Verbal abuse damages one's self esteem. You have written this in perfect 5-7-5 format, too. Excellent last line--child lost forever. judi
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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What you say is so true. Hurtful words can damage a child, just as physical abuse does. They can easily turn a child against the parent. Sometimes adults are victims of verbal abuse from their spouses, too. Verbal abuse damages one's self esteem. You have written this in perfect 5-7-5 format, too. Excellent last line--child lost forever. judi
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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thank you for your kind review of my work
Comment from Ben Colder
Words can kill or give life. A matter of choice. Great photo . Poor little fellow somebody probably spanked his little buttocks. Just kidding. Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Words can kill or give life. A matter of choice. Great photo . Poor little fellow somebody probably spanked his little buttocks. Just kidding. Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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thank you for such a kind review of my workT
