senryu ( pig needing cash )
senryu24 total reviews
Comment from ChowChow
Really cute... A pig hocking ham! Must be really hungry. What else will you come up with? The picture does your poem justice.But, I wonder...just whose ham is this pig hocking, anyway? Couldn't be his! Or could it? If so, give him the best.... SIX stars. Yaaaaaaaaaah. Very goood poem. I enjoyed it with all its format. chowchow
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
Really cute... A pig hocking ham! Must be really hungry. What else will you come up with? The picture does your poem justice.But, I wonder...just whose ham is this pig hocking, anyway? Couldn't be his! Or could it? If so, give him the best.... SIX stars. Yaaaaaaaaaah. Very goood poem. I enjoyed it with all its format. chowchow
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Thank you so very much. Glad you enjoyed this one. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It's a cute poem and play on words. This poem reminds me of the GEICO pig. Anyway, about a week ago we had ham and bean soup. MY husband made it in the crock pot with ham hocks.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
It's a cute poem and play on words. This poem reminds me of the GEICO pig. Anyway, about a week ago we had ham and bean soup. MY husband made it in the crock pot with ham hocks.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Thank you. ~Debbie
Comment from Righteous Riter
pig needing cash
visits local pawnshop
to hock his ham
Good complimentary photo. This piece does not exceed 17 syllables. Good alliteration with hock/his/harm. Clear message that is short, simple and filled with humor.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
pig needing cash
visits local pawnshop
to hock his ham
Good complimentary photo. This piece does not exceed 17 syllables. Good alliteration with hock/his/harm. Clear message that is short, simple and filled with humor.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Thank you. ~Debbie
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Debbie,
number one... I love pigs... first you put a smile on my face with your clever pun, then you took it away with the ham and bean soup... did I mention, I love pigs?
Thanks I needed the laugh... very clever indeed.
With our thoughts we create,
something else that go with beans,
James xx
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
Hi Debbie,
number one... I love pigs... first you put a smile on my face with your clever pun, then you took it away with the ham and bean soup... did I mention, I love pigs?
Thanks I needed the laugh... very clever indeed.
With our thoughts we create,
something else that go with beans,
James xx
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Hi, James. Thank you so much, my dear friend~Debbie
Comment from me_tudor
LOL! That is hilarious and perfect for a job. Why did the pig go to the pawnshop? To hock his ham! I'll be laughing the rest of the afternoon over that. And ham and beans sounds good. :)
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
LOL! That is hilarious and perfect for a job. Why did the pig go to the pawnshop? To hock his ham! I'll be laughing the rest of the afternoon over that. And ham and beans sounds good. :)
Comment Written 28-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Thank you~Debbie
Comment from Terrie DeGolier
Oh My God this is so funny. I laughed till I cried when I read it. Very good sense of humor, great poem. Thank you for making my evening complete. Terrie
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
Oh My God this is so funny. I laughed till I cried when I read it. Very good sense of humor, great poem. Thank you for making my evening complete. Terrie
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed~Debbie
Comment from RGstar
Poor pig. I hope he doesn't forget to retrieve it again, or they will definitely sell it.
A good humorous write, Debbie.
Best wishes,
RG
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
Poor pig. I hope he doesn't forget to retrieve it again, or they will definitely sell it.
A good humorous write, Debbie.
Best wishes,
RG
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed, my friend~Debbie
Comment from krys123
Definitely better achieved by reading this out loud Which made me laugh very much by your twist and finagling of words.
Thank you so much for posting and sharing this work for others. May you have a good one and God bless.
Alex
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
Definitely better achieved by reading this out loud Which made me laugh very much by your twist and finagling of words.
Thank you so much for posting and sharing this work for others. May you have a good one and God bless.
Alex
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Glad you enjoyed. Thank you kindly, my friend~Debbie
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Debbie, you are so welcome.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Debbie - this made me laugh, and then your author notes did as well.
Light, fun and well penned.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
Dear Debbie - this made me laugh, and then your author notes did as well.
Light, fun and well penned.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you~Debbie :)
Comment from GWHARGIS
I have heard of food talking back at you later, but this is a real special treat. So beans and ham are your muse. Funny pome and very nice delivery of the clever message. nice imagery and the picture goes great. nicely done.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
I have heard of food talking back at you later, but this is a real special treat. So beans and ham are your muse. Funny pome and very nice delivery of the clever message. nice imagery and the picture goes great. nicely done.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you~Debbie :)