A Madness of Merriment
a bit of whimsy154 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
You do wonder what they are thinking and what makes them smile. Peek-a-boo is so much fun with little ones.
This is a charming little 7/3 poem that makes me smile.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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You do wonder what they are thinking and what makes them smile. Peek-a-boo is so much fun with little ones.
This is a charming little 7/3 poem that makes me smile.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Janet, for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from comanalbert
Always wondered what might happen in their pretty heads when the appear wrapped in deep thoughts,or sharp staring, playing hide and seek...
Excellent as always!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Always wondered what might happen in their pretty heads when the appear wrapped in deep thoughts,or sharp staring, playing hide and seek...
Excellent as always!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much, comanalbert, for your gracious and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
7/3 and two rhymes. He's taking perspective from within the security of his own little world. He's a he, and you're a you. cute verse and picture Brooke. Kenny
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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7/3 and two rhymes. He's taking perspective from within the security of his own little world. He's a he, and you're a you. cute verse and picture Brooke. Kenny
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Kenny, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from NewFuture
I liked your poem. It makes me think of what my nephew see's threw his eyes when he looks at me.I'm glad I'm able to put on a desscise on for him so he don't see my flaws.But again good job on your poem.
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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I liked your poem. It makes me think of what my nephew see's threw his eyes when he looks at me.I'm glad I'm able to put on a desscise on for him so he don't see my flaws.But again good job on your poem.
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Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Thank you, NewFuture, for taking the time to review. Since on Fan Story a 4 means, needs improvement, could I ask for clarification of what you would like to see changed/improved? Brooke
Comment from Gypsy Starchild
No visit to Fanstoria would be complete without stopping in to read a couple of your awesome smile generating nuggets! That boy is growing like a weed.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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No visit to Fanstoria would be complete without stopping in to read a couple of your awesome smile generating nuggets! That boy is growing like a weed.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Gypsy Starchild, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from rouskin
A madness of merriment occupies the world when I'm seeing it through your eyes. You are absolutely right Thank you for sharing and sleep tight :) I enjoyed reading it very much Words of wisdom Blessings, Rouskin
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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A madness of merriment occupies the world when I'm seeing it through your eyes. You are absolutely right Thank you for sharing and sleep tight :) I enjoyed reading it very much Words of wisdom Blessings, Rouskin
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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Rouskin, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from victor 66
Again, your poems remind me of my grandchildren. Sometimes they get so involved in an activity that time and space is suspended. Then there are other times when their activities are simultaneous and they multitask. It is never dull. It is a very nice poem. Thank you.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Again, your poems remind me of my grandchildren. Sometimes they get so involved in an activity that time and space is suspended. Then there are other times when their activities are simultaneous and they multitask. It is never dull. It is a very nice poem. Thank you.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Victor, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
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You are welcome.
Comment from Ekim777
And a little child shall lead them. It seems that we must all return to a state of childlike laughter. But don't we take ourselves all too seriously. Best wishes. -Ekim777
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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And a little child shall lead them. It seems that we must all return to a state of childlike laughter. But don't we take ourselves all too seriously. Best wishes. -Ekim777
Comment Written 28-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Ekim, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from me_tudor
AWWWW! That is such a sweet poem. Sawyer is getting so big. You do have to wonder what they are thinking. My grandson loves to play peek-a-boo. He probably thinks, "Those big people are so silly." :)
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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AWWWW! That is such a sweet poem. Sawyer is getting so big. You do have to wonder what they are thinking. My grandson loves to play peek-a-boo. He probably thinks, "Those big people are so silly." :)
Comment Written 28-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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me_tudor, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from The Boy Whodunnit!
I enjoyed this - very well written with well chosen words.
The las two lines really make this, and put the rest of the poem into context - I read it a second time, and every word then came through with meaning.
BW
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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I enjoyed this - very well written with well chosen words.
The las two lines really make this, and put the rest of the poem into context - I read it a second time, and every word then came through with meaning.
BW
Comment Written 28-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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BW, thank you so much :-) Brooke
