I Was Just Thinking
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Comment from madhatter1977
Mikey, what can I say? Stardom awaits you if you can write like this my friend! Very powerful and brilliant story I can relate to definitely! Love it. No fear of the shadow, I was setting a ship in a glass bottle sailing in a bathtub last night. Entirely normal behaviour I would say! Best wishes, my good and unique friend. By the way have a cup of tea - it's world peace day! Pete :)
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Mikey, what can I say? Stardom awaits you if you can write like this my friend! Very powerful and brilliant story I can relate to definitely! Love it. No fear of the shadow, I was setting a ship in a glass bottle sailing in a bathtub last night. Entirely normal behaviour I would say! Best wishes, my good and unique friend. By the way have a cup of tea - it's world peace day! Pete :)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
Comment from Sasha
Being crazy has its benefits. You get a free opportunity to view the world from the inside out and don't have to take pills to make it turn right side out. I know, I have been officially diagnosed crazy a few times myself. this was very interesting and kept me glued to the screen from beginning to end.
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Being crazy has its benefits. You get a free opportunity to view the world from the inside out and don't have to take pills to make it turn right side out. I know, I have been officially diagnosed crazy a few times myself. this was very interesting and kept me glued to the screen from beginning to end.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
Comment from Marillion
I don't think you're crazy, Mikey. Well, crazy brilliant, maybe. I could almost hear this as a voice-over monologue, and there's a lot of meat to gnaw off the bone, here, my friend. Is it death? A dream? A wish? A drug-addled illusion. The possibilities are limitless, and for that I love it. Mikey, what I especially like about your work is my ability to let go and just enjoy it, since you do all the heavy lifting. Always a read I can sink into, you clever man.
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I don't think you're crazy, Mikey. Well, crazy brilliant, maybe. I could almost hear this as a voice-over monologue, and there's a lot of meat to gnaw off the bone, here, my friend. Is it death? A dream? A wish? A drug-addled illusion. The possibilities are limitless, and for that I love it. Mikey, what I especially like about your work is my ability to let go and just enjoy it, since you do all the heavy lifting. Always a read I can sink into, you clever man.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
Comment from CR Delport
I think I have to agree with your wife :) The curious case of Mike Cahill :) But you have a gift, my friend. Very few people can take nothing, and make a readable story out of it. NOt only is it readable, but it is an enjoyable read.
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I think I have to agree with your wife :) The curious case of Mike Cahill :) But you have a gift, my friend. Very few people can take nothing, and make a readable story out of it. NOt only is it readable, but it is an enjoyable read.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
LOL! I have to agree with your wife here. But it sure was interesting. THe stuff of a dream.. or nightmare in my case. You seem to like what was going on, which is good, I suppose. :)
overpowering: one word
>> no wind chill factor Delete CHILL, it's just the wind factor here.
>> inner cities housing
You mean "city's housing"
>> I focus for the moment on them I admit freely
Needs punctuation.
>> by cold bodys seeking
Spelled "bodies"
>> summersaulting
Spelled "somersaulting" and needs a comma in front of it here.
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LOL! I have to agree with your wife here. But it sure was interesting. THe stuff of a dream.. or nightmare in my case. You seem to like what was going on, which is good, I suppose. :)
overpowering: one word
>> no wind chill factor Delete CHILL, it's just the wind factor here.
>> inner cities housing
You mean "city's housing"
>> I focus for the moment on them I admit freely
Needs punctuation.
>> by cold bodys seeking
Spelled "bodies"
>> summersaulting
Spelled "somersaulting" and needs a comma in front of it here.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
Comment from seaglass
Ok, here's what I think. The dude's dead and doesn't know it. But I have to admit, I have freakin dreams like this when I sleep so maybe that's why I stay up and write. It is well written and holds the readers interest, trying to figure out what the heck is happening.
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Ok, here's what I think. The dude's dead and doesn't know it. But I have to admit, I have freakin dreams like this when I sleep so maybe that's why I stay up and write. It is well written and holds the readers interest, trying to figure out what the heck is happening.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Mikey, you never cease to amaze. I laughed my _ss! off. How on Earth did you think of this one. I'm confounded, this belongs in a nut house. (humor) Your author notes are even funnier. Did she really call you wacko. Was you dead in this story? And you watched you mate disappear in an ambulance. This is funny, worthy of a bookcase, I must say. You would make a good comedian. You got thoughts, nobody else would dream of.
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Mikey, you never cease to amaze. I laughed my _ss! off. How on Earth did you think of this one. I'm confounded, this belongs in a nut house. (humor) Your author notes are even funnier. Did she really call you wacko. Was you dead in this story? And you watched you mate disappear in an ambulance. This is funny, worthy of a bookcase, I must say. You would make a good comedian. You got thoughts, nobody else would dream of.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Your crazy.
Your crazy.
Your crazy.
Your crazy.
Well I guess that answers that. And one more thing....your crazy. An absolutd genius. And I love your writing.
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Your crazy.
Your crazy.
Your crazy.
Your crazy.
Well I guess that answers that. And one more thing....your crazy. An absolutd genius. And I love your writing.
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Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
Comment from Sankey
Yep crazy yet again or were you ever NOT crazy? Aren't most writers crazy anyway? Good work and NO SPAGS AMAZING! Thanks for a very curious read mate. Found another Aussie on FS today DJ something I told him to look out for you.
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Yep crazy yet again or were you ever NOT crazy? Aren't most writers crazy anyway? Good work and NO SPAGS AMAZING! Thanks for a very curious read mate. Found another Aussie on FS today DJ something I told him to look out for you.
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Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
