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Love Among the Thorns

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Comment from chasennov
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"Forbidden Hearts" It seems like your Vet has the best of two worlds and does not know how to handle either. A very good chapter for this story. This is the type of work I love to read. Well done.

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 Comment Written 12-May-2014


reply by the author on 12-May-2014
    Thank you so much. Your words mean a lot to me.
reply by chasennov on 13-May-2014
    You are most welcome.
Comment from c_lucas
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When it comes to a man, a woman will never fight fair. This is very well written with smooth flow of words, making for a very strong read.

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 Comment Written 12-May-2014


reply by the author on 12-May-2014
    That's because a good man "IS" hard to find. LOL Thanks Charlie.
reply by c_lucas on 12-May-2014
    In the words of Mae West, "A hard man is good to find." You're welcome, Amahra. Charlie
reply by the author on 12-May-2014
    LOL! You are sooo naughty.
Comment from Riss Ryker518
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

First, I absolutely love your style of writing. Your imagery is fantastic, letting the reader see the character loud and clear. My favorite line, " Dark clouds further unburden themselves, while the moist air took on a slight chill, and the rain sounded as a thousand fingers drumming upon the roof.' Great job!

 Comment Written 12-May-2014


reply by the author on 12-May-2014
    Wow, well thank you Riss. I'm really appreciate this review. It's very encouraging, my dear.