Hyde And Seek
The rogue rides again...(see notes)40 total reviews
Comment from Kashif Ali Abbas
The artwork, the style, all is awesome.
So then it?s off to Britain for a bit of fish-and-chips,
And when she?s lit and smitten I?ll be fixed betwixt her hips.
I?ll wait, then take the red-eye in a tube of phallic might?
A dead-eye tantric Jedi, I?m a transatlantic knight.[ my pick]
WHATS tantric? check spellings
K
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2014
The artwork, the style, all is awesome.
So then it?s off to Britain for a bit of fish-and-chips,
And when she?s lit and smitten I?ll be fixed betwixt her hips.
I?ll wait, then take the red-eye in a tube of phallic might?
A dead-eye tantric Jedi, I?m a transatlantic knight.[ my pick]
WHATS tantric? check spellings
K
Comment Written 24-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2014
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Thank you very much, K, for your nice review. Tantric is a sexual technique best googled for the definition.
Comment from pipersfancy
Oh - do I wait to review this 'till I can offer a '6'? Or just go for it now... Hmmm..
As always, so well written, and a pleasure to read (it seems the Rogue pleasures women both in and out of bed...)
Did a double take on this line:
Removing my regalia, I can double-point my sins.
(it's late, I'm tired, the lighting isn't wonderful where I'm sitting, and for a split second I was scratching my head, wondering why in the world you would want to remove your genitalia...)
Alas - I digress! This world-wide rolling in hay had me laughing out loud... Warren Beatty... I guess! (You're SO vain...)
Christina
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
Oh - do I wait to review this 'till I can offer a '6'? Or just go for it now... Hmmm..
As always, so well written, and a pleasure to read (it seems the Rogue pleasures women both in and out of bed...)
Did a double take on this line:
Removing my regalia, I can double-point my sins.
(it's late, I'm tired, the lighting isn't wonderful where I'm sitting, and for a split second I was scratching my head, wondering why in the world you would want to remove your genitalia...)
Alas - I digress! This world-wide rolling in hay had me laughing out loud... Warren Beatty... I guess! (You're SO vain...)
Christina
Comment Written 22-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
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Exactly! Nobody else guessed that Warren Beatty line, so goodonya, my friend! Thanks so much, Christina. Glad you waited. Hoping one (or more) of the sonnets written today will earn your sixer, and I think your misread of the line in question was a Freudian slip, or slit. ;-) I appreciate your appreciation, Christina!
Comment from michaelcahill
This is just killer. Hahaha. Back in the saddle with a vengeance! I have some silliness that I am loathe to post after reading this. I think the Rogue may emerge victorious after all. In any case, oh! the stories and memories! mikey
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
This is just killer. Hahaha. Back in the saddle with a vengeance! I have some silliness that I am loathe to post after reading this. I think the Rogue may emerge victorious after all. In any case, oh! the stories and memories! mikey
Comment Written 22-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
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Don't hesitate to post it, Mikey. I'm sure it's apt, deft, and with enough poetic heft to sit proudly amongst the others.
Thanks so much, my friend. I had a blast with this one!
Comment from AudreyRose
This was great! An enjoyable and delightful piece of wicked fun that brought a smile to my face. You definitely got the naughtiness right, the details were enough to cause a but of a blush im sure you were aiming for. Good job
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
This was great! An enjoyable and delightful piece of wicked fun that brought a smile to my face. You definitely got the naughtiness right, the details were enough to cause a but of a blush im sure you were aiming for. Good job
Comment Written 22-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
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I was, Audrey! Thanks so much for a great review!
Comment from Donya Quijote
I knew from the title that this excursion would be a fun ride and I was not disappointed. I can tell you had fun calling out and including the principle hens in this regular tit for tat riposte and riposte again in this humorous sortie. On this ride we travelled the world of fun roguery. But I feel that is my duty to as a humble observer that the literary rogues he so faithfully imitates were all felled by sword and love, and one was even redeemed by the death of she who dared to love a rogue true.
This was fun. Now I must find this day's ripostes to see if the hens have got the rogue in their clutches and have started a hardy pecking...
Always a pleasure to read the latest exploited of Fanstory's galant rogue...
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
I knew from the title that this excursion would be a fun ride and I was not disappointed. I can tell you had fun calling out and including the principle hens in this regular tit for tat riposte and riposte again in this humorous sortie. On this ride we travelled the world of fun roguery. But I feel that is my duty to as a humble observer that the literary rogues he so faithfully imitates were all felled by sword and love, and one was even redeemed by the death of she who dared to love a rogue true.
This was fun. Now I must find this day's ripostes to see if the hens have got the rogue in their clutches and have started a hardy pecking...
Always a pleasure to read the latest exploited of Fanstory's galant rogue...
Comment Written 22-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
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Donya, your caution is duly noted and agreed with. This rogue will fall, too, by sword and/or love, at some point, but he's riding high now! :) Thank you so much for the time you spend with my work.
Comment from Alan K Pease
So this is the rogue you are famous for. Phyllis once mentioned you and you exchange of poetic viewpoints. I would expect you should be called a bounder and cad. I think you are having fun with your imagination and like to parry with the opposite sex, not to put them down but to see what they say in turn - all in traditional poetry or not?
Phyllis health is a tragedy for she is well loved for her poetry, prose and person.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
So this is the rogue you are famous for. Phyllis once mentioned you and you exchange of poetic viewpoints. I would expect you should be called a bounder and cad. I think you are having fun with your imagination and like to parry with the opposite sex, not to put them down but to see what they say in turn - all in traditional poetry or not?
Phyllis health is a tragedy for she is well loved for her poetry, prose and person.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
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Yes, this is the fellow. Bounder and cad work, as well as many other monikers of ill repute. Yes, I was just made aware of Phyllis' health issues, and am very sorry about it.
Thank you for the review.
Comment from robina1978
Excellent photo that complements your poem extremely well. I saw you used many a female name, nice. You went all over the world for this. Excellent rhyme and meter.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
Excellent photo that complements your poem extremely well. I saw you used many a female name, nice. You went all over the world for this. Excellent rhyme and meter.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
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Thank you, my friend.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I must look for the other poems you share with the ladies on here. LOL, this could get some husbands chasing after you! This is such a fun poem, great to read, and put smiles on our faces. Xsx Sandra :):) :)
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
I must look for the other poems you share with the ladies on here. LOL, this could get some husbands chasing after you! This is such a fun poem, great to read, and put smiles on our faces. Xsx Sandra :):) :)
Comment Written 22-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much, Sandra, for the great review, and also for taking the series with the intended satire in mind. Yes, the rogue can only go so long without receiving his comeuppance.
Comment from barkingdog
Now, I shall have to read their replies to this tell all series of fine quatrains.
You, sir, profess to being quite the lover, pleasing or saying you do, so many as you sprint at the speed of superman around the globe.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
Now, I shall have to read their replies to this tell all series of fine quatrains.
You, sir, profess to being quite the lover, pleasing or saying you do, so many as you sprint at the speed of superman around the globe.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
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Actually, it's just my alter ego, but you're correct that he thinks quite a bit of himself. The ladies listed in the notes are the main ones who have been riposting with me. Thank you!
Comment from James Dooney
This is pretty cool man. Its nice and deep here. I feel that this is a story that has a few twists and turns all very nicely rolled into one. Good job !@
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
This is pretty cool man. Its nice and deep here. I feel that this is a story that has a few twists and turns all very nicely rolled into one. Good job !@
Comment Written 21-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
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Thanks very much, James. I appreciate it!