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~ Romantic Admirer ~

Happy Valentine's Day

11 total reviews 
Comment from adewpearl
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a solid acrostic for Romantic Admirer
excellent use of rhyming couplets
good alliteration in phrases like mystery mate
a wonderfully upbeat romantic story :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
    I'm so sorry for the delay in showing my appreciation Brooke. Time has not been on my side lol Thank you so very much foe your wonderful comment and rating....xoxo
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
    I'm so sorry for the delay in showing my appreciation Brooke. Time has not been on my side lol Thank you so very much foe your wonderful comment and rating....xoxo
Comment from words
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I enjoyed your rhyming acrostic.

This is a difficult form and you executed it well.

I am all for a "romantic mystery night with Mr. Right."

Have not yet found him, but hopes burns eternal. LOL

Hugs, d

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2014

reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
    Sorry for the big delay in showing my appreciation for your awesome comment and rating!! Thank you my friend....xoxo
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
    Sorry for the big delay in showing my appreciation for your awesome comment and rating!! Thank you my friend....xoxo
Comment from Selina Stambi
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R omantic admirer seeking my name ... a sweet opening line to a poem of romantic aspirations.


R omantic admirer no longer seeking my name ... Bingo! Hurrah!!

A fun, smile-y sort of poem. :)


Best wishes for the contest, Heidi. Hope you've had a great week. :)

Love,

Sonali xx




sexy(,) wild and fun



 Comment Written 23-Jul-2014

reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
    Hello Sonali....
    Please accept my apology for the delay in showing you my appreciation for your great comment and rating. I am very grateful, thank you my friend....xoxo
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
    Hello Sonali....
    Please accept my apology for the delay in showing you my appreciation for your great comment and rating. I am very grateful, thank you my friend....xoxo
Comment from irishauthorme
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Ah, a story sad but true, so many hearts are given away and then returned, unrewarded. Very clever use of the words, and a great picture to go with. Seems like a long time since I'eve read your work, and a good reminder for me to write something!
irish

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
    Thank you so much!! I haven't been writing much since my beautiful Grand baby, Sophia passed away. Struggling pretty hard with that. However I've started writing a novel in memory of her but I'm scared to put it up on here. Wat do u think? I miss chatting with you buddy. ;(
reply by irishauthorme on 20-Feb-2014
    Considering some of the present clients on FS, your fears are well-founded. However, there are many intelligent, understanding people here too. My personal feelings are that your novel would be a fitting tribute to a little girl who never got to reach her
    potential and was taken from us too soon. I also believe that this post would be a step toward the healing that you need to continue on with your life. You are far too fine a writer to have your talent lapse. I am sure there are many more fans that miss you.
    Hey, any help I can render, just ask.
    irish
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
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Hi Heidi
What a truly romantic valentines acrostic poem. Nicely rhymed, free flowing, entertaining and really well written. It is a very good entry and you should do well in the contest. Best wishes to you. Hugs, W ^-^

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
    Thank you so much my friend!! xoxo
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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This is a wonderful Valentine's acrostic poem. Great use of rhyme. This is one of the best entries I have read. Good luck in the contest~Debbie

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
    WOW!! Thank you so very much for making my entire night !! I really appreciate it a great deal friend....xoxo
Comment from Izzabell
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Although a few lines were a little off on the count, I thoroughly enjoyed you cute little romantic banter. The picture fit the work so perfectly. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
    Thank u so much....xoxo
Comment from darla1977
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This is delightful, colorful, and fun!!! Cute presentation! No revisions needed on this jewel! Very nice flow to this well written verse! Great job!

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
    Thank you so very much my friend. I really appreciate it a great del. xoxo
Comment from kiwijenny
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How cute ...picture and poem...we went out with our grown kids and grand babies ...adorable...for Valentines.....I love your romantic admirer acrostic...but does this ever happen?
God bless

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
    That's a great way to spend Valentines Day I think....thank you so much for the great comment and rating. I truly appreciate it.......xoxo
Comment from c_lucas
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Many a young girl has been led astray because she did not think before she leaped. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

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 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
    Thank you so very much!! I had fun with this one and Im glad you liked it....xoxo
reply by c_lucas on 19-Feb-2014
    You're welcome, Heidi. Charlie