I Feared
an English sonnet201 total reviews
Comment from AprilShower
It is through children that we get a second or third chance to rediscover the miracles around us. It is wonderful to get this chance, Brooke. I am happy for the joy you've found in your grandchild. Well done.
April
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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It is through children that we get a second or third chance to rediscover the miracles around us. It is wonderful to get this chance, Brooke. I am happy for the joy you've found in your grandchild. Well done.
April
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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April, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello adewpearl, Brooke, You've penned another goodie. Your poem is a wonderful illustration of the joy and hope that a smile can bring. Of special note:
But just as joy seemed lost beyond my scope,
your life began and dried up all my tears.
With every smile you flashed I found new hope
that reignited stars and eased my fears.
(Beautifully stated)
I'm sending a smile your way. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Hello adewpearl, Brooke, You've penned another goodie. Your poem is a wonderful illustration of the joy and hope that a smile can bring. Of special note:
But just as joy seemed lost beyond my scope,
your life began and dried up all my tears.
With every smile you flashed I found new hope
that reignited stars and eased my fears.
(Beautifully stated)
I'm sending a smile your way. LateBloomer
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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LateBloomer, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from fastdigits
Each of your writings a gem
each time your words flow
down the screen.
This one, so full of meaning
with your pen ultimate four
lines "but just as joy seemed lost
beyond my scope, your life began and
dried up all my tears.
"with every smile you flashed I found new hope
that reignited stars and eased my fears.
A message and commentary, when it is the
darkest, a simple smile does ignite the
spirits and once more there is something to
look for over the next horizon.
Well done and good luck
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Each of your writings a gem
each time your words flow
down the screen.
This one, so full of meaning
with your pen ultimate four
lines "but just as joy seemed lost
beyond my scope, your life began and
dried up all my tears.
"with every smile you flashed I found new hope
that reignited stars and eased my fears.
A message and commentary, when it is the
darkest, a simple smile does ignite the
spirits and once more there is something to
look for over the next horizon.
Well done and good luck
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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thank you so much, fastdigits. I truly appreciate your generous sixth star and most thoughtful comments. Brooke :-)
Comment from harmony13
An excellent poem! The author's word are heart felt, strong and descriptive. The reader found this poem emotional and filled with hope. The artwork as always is just precious and enhances the read.
Thank you, harmony13
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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An excellent poem! The author's word are heart felt, strong and descriptive. The reader found this poem emotional and filled with hope. The artwork as always is just precious and enhances the read.
Thank you, harmony13
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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harmony, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Your face has chased away all trace of gloom,
as dandelions now glow in golden bloom
such a lovely sonnet, Brooke - the words, rhythm and rhyme all flowing perfectly - most impressive and the pictures are
so lovely - thanks for sharing them.
And good luck with the contest.
Margaret
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Your face has chased away all trace of gloom,
as dandelions now glow in golden bloom
such a lovely sonnet, Brooke - the words, rhythm and rhyme all flowing perfectly - most impressive and the pictures are
so lovely - thanks for sharing them.
And good luck with the contest.
Margaret
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Margaret, thank you so very much, my friend. I appreciate your kind contest wishes and generous rating :-) Brooke
Comment from 3boysrule
It was as if you read my mind with this delightful poem. I just started writing a poem about letting go of my children, and the pain that follows. Then I read this wonderful, happy poem. I truly loved it. Giving hope that life doesn't end when your babies move away. Thanks so much for sharing!
Dee
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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It was as if you read my mind with this delightful poem. I just started writing a poem about letting go of my children, and the pain that follows. Then I read this wonderful, happy poem. I truly loved it. Giving hope that life doesn't end when your babies move away. Thanks so much for sharing!
Dee
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Dee, thank you so much :-) I so appreciate your thoughtful comments and generous rating :-) Brooke
Comment from ragamuffin
Certainly and uplifting piece and one I suppose many whom are no longer children can identify with. I know I can. Children renew everything? except their library books before they're due. lol Adorable photos.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Certainly and uplifting piece and one I suppose many whom are no longer children can identify with. I know I can. Children renew everything? except their library books before they're due. lol Adorable photos.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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LOL - I had a son who was so bad at the whole library book thing that I had the school librarian cut him off. :-) Thanks so much, ragamuffin :-) Brooke
Comment from barleygirl
I'm not much of a rhythm judge, but this poem doesn't convey your usual high level of rhythmic interest. But a peppy pace is not required here, since your message is what's catching my attention big time. This is the most self-revealing poem you've written about your grandson & that aspect is what makes it so palpable & profound. I've never had kids or grandkids, & I can still totally relate to what you've expressed here. It's very beautiful becuz of the depth of your feelings revealed. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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I'm not much of a rhythm judge, but this poem doesn't convey your usual high level of rhythmic interest. But a peppy pace is not required here, since your message is what's catching my attention big time. This is the most self-revealing poem you've written about your grandson & that aspect is what makes it so palpable & profound. I've never had kids or grandkids, & I can still totally relate to what you've expressed here. It's very beautiful becuz of the depth of your feelings revealed. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Thank you for reviewing, barleygirl - I think the rhythm you're perceiving is a result of using iambic pentameter as sonnets require instead of the faster paced iambic tetrameter that I normally use :-) Brooke
Comment from Mastery
What a wonderful poem, Brooke. So much feeling poured into each line. You always hit the nail right on the head and plunk the heartstrings in me.
"The lightning bugs that once lit up my nights
had faded like the twinkling of each star,
and dandelion seeds in wishful flights
had traveled off to places much too far."
Brilliant and deserving of six stars, but alas I am out. Bob
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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What a wonderful poem, Brooke. So much feeling poured into each line. You always hit the nail right on the head and plunk the heartstrings in me.
"The lightning bugs that once lit up my nights
had faded like the twinkling of each star,
and dandelion seeds in wishful flights
had traveled off to places much too far."
Brilliant and deserving of six stars, but alas I am out. Bob
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Bob, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from robina1978
Excellent photo's of Sawyer again. They complement your Sonnet so well as he's happy and he makes you happy. You wrote of course a beautiful Sonnet: turning from gloomy to cheerful.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Excellent photo's of Sawyer again. They complement your Sonnet so well as he's happy and he makes you happy. You wrote of course a beautiful Sonnet: turning from gloomy to cheerful.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Ine, thank you so much :-) Brooke
