I Feared
an English sonnet201 total reviews
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. This little guy sure does bring joy to your life and muse:-). Well a lovely sonnet.It works as it should.
.seemed lost beyond my scope,
your life began and dried up all my tears.
With every smile you flashed I found new hope
that reignited stars and eased my fears.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Hi. This little guy sure does bring joy to your life and muse:-). Well a lovely sonnet.It works as it should.
.seemed lost beyond my scope,
your life began and dried up all my tears.
With every smile you flashed I found new hope
that reignited stars and eased my fears.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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padumachitta, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Stephanie Kay
I taught in a preschool for one year and one of the things I loved best about it was watching as my two and three year old charges discovered things for the first time. Concepts that we no longer even register as adults are in fact fascinating and exciting and being with someone who's going through that stage reminds us of what we are missing...
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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I taught in a preschool for one year and one of the things I loved best about it was watching as my two and three year old charges discovered things for the first time. Concepts that we no longer even register as adults are in fact fascinating and exciting and being with someone who's going through that stage reminds us of what we are missing...
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much, Stephanie. I agree with you about how wondrous it is to watch little ones discovering the world and being so excited about it. Sawyer LOVES fans, calls them wind, and gets visibly excited when seeing them. A visit to Target is an adventure for him LOL Brooke :-)
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Awww.... that's so cute!
Comment from lancellot
A beautifully written poem. I think reading your postings is like attending a poetry class. Again you have combined wisdom, form and entertainment into a piece smoothly.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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A beautifully written poem. I think reading your postings is like attending a poetry class. Again you have combined wisdom, form and entertainment into a piece smoothly.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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lancellot, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Grandchildren are such a source of delight and seem to turn grey skies to blue.
Your perfect English sonnet depicts all the love and happiness your delightful little grandson injects into your life.
Perfect Sonnet structure and a lovely and very special subject choice.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Grandchildren are such a source of delight and seem to turn grey skies to blue.
Your perfect English sonnet depicts all the love and happiness your delightful little grandson injects into your life.
Perfect Sonnet structure and a lovely and very special subject choice.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Seken, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Helvi2
Hi Brooke,
Your grandson Sawyer has deifinitely been an inspiration for your muse. Love the positive feel these poems have. Discovery is a wonderful thing and I love the journies that both you and Sawyer are taking here. I don't know much about Sonnets, but this one led me to a smile.
Very Nicely Done My Friend!
:o) Helvi
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Hi Brooke,
Your grandson Sawyer has deifinitely been an inspiration for your muse. Love the positive feel these poems have. Discovery is a wonderful thing and I love the journies that both you and Sawyer are taking here. I don't know much about Sonnets, but this one led me to a smile.
Very Nicely Done My Friend!
:o) Helvi
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Helvi, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Kausar_Javeria
Wow..A very well-written sonnet!
I loved it..IT's very nice and these lines caught my attention:
'But just as joy seemed lost beyond my scope,
your life began and dried up all my tears.'
Great Job..Cute Picture too..
God Bless~!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Wow..A very well-written sonnet!
I loved it..IT's very nice and these lines caught my attention:
'But just as joy seemed lost beyond my scope,
your life began and dried up all my tears.'
Great Job..Cute Picture too..
God Bless~!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Kausar, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this beautiful sonnet about the face of love that sent the sadness away. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this beautiful sonnet about the face of love that sent the sadness away. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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sweetwoodjax, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dave Russell
Awww...this is so nice Brooke. It is so true that a new life can change perspective with just a smile. This is a beautiful piece and I can't imagine that it would not win the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Awww...this is so nice Brooke. It is so true that a new life can change perspective with just a smile. This is a beautiful piece and I can't imagine that it would not win the contest.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Thanks so very much, Dave :-) Brooke
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
The lightning bugs that once lit up my nights, had faded like the twinkling of each star. Brooke, I found this one to be a delightful read. His little face would chase away all trace of gloom. Good luck in the sonnet contest. :-) Carolyn
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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The lightning bugs that once lit up my nights, had faded like the twinkling of each star. Brooke, I found this one to be a delightful read. His little face would chase away all trace of gloom. Good luck in the sonnet contest. :-) Carolyn
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Carolyn, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from janalma
A sonnet full of sorrowful angst until a face appears that dispels it all. Expressive and so very human. We seem to go in spurts, fun and joy, then depression and regret. And it is the people in our lives that make it all worth while.
I love that closed-mouth smile of Sawyer's. Also, when he breaks down and just laughs. Sweet boy.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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A sonnet full of sorrowful angst until a face appears that dispels it all. Expressive and so very human. We seem to go in spurts, fun and joy, then depression and regret. And it is the people in our lives that make it all worth while.
I love that closed-mouth smile of Sawyer's. Also, when he breaks down and just laughs. Sweet boy.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much, janalma - I love all the various ways he smiles :-) Brooke
