The Devil by Firelight, part 9
Jeremy tells Jenny his plan33 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent chapter. I'm nervous about the knife. Jeremy is not going to attack anybody. Maybe Jenny has a better job... keeping my fingers cross. I hope the sheriff sees the message. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Excellent chapter. I'm nervous about the knife. Jeremy is not going to attack anybody. Maybe Jenny has a better job... keeping my fingers cross. I hope the sheriff sees the message. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much. Jeremy would be very limited. Gretchen
Comment from John Ciarmello
Okay still reading backward! Lol. You must think I'm crazy, but it's all making sense to me now. The clarification of the 911 message on the shed roof makes more sense now! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Okay still reading backward! Lol. You must think I'm crazy, but it's all making sense to me now. The clarification of the 911 message on the shed roof makes more sense now! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 21-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Thanks for this. I appreciate this. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
That's my girl, I don't see how Patrick can win, he has to sleep sometime and now that Jeremy has a knife, it gives him a slight edge, but who knows with someone like Patrick, malevolence personified, beautifully written Jenny, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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That's my girl, I don't see how Patrick can win, he has to sleep sometime and now that Jeremy has a knife, it gives him a slight edge, but who knows with someone like Patrick, malevolence personified, beautifully written Jenny, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much. I'm glad it rang true with you. Gretchen
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Now I?m involved, it?s amazing how emotion can involve one,
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Jenny did the right thing to hide all the knives, but escaping should be the first thing on the agenda, this situation will go from bad to worse very soon and who knows how it will end up with these guys, a fine chapter Gretchen, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Jenny did the right thing to hide all the knives, but escaping should be the first thing on the agenda, this situation will go from bad to worse very soon and who knows how it will end up with these guys, a fine chapter Gretchen, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Dolly. Appreciate this. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
This was a great chapter. Some good planning in the hope of being able to get away, somehow. Keep it coming. Still very dramatic and can't find any spags.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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This was a great chapter. Some good planning in the hope of being able to get away, somehow. Keep it coming. Still very dramatic and can't find any spags.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you are into this. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
She is very quick-witted and just as well. P is thoroughly evil and sickening. I am still hoping that Fin may prove his worth by siding with them against his brother. Very well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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She is very quick-witted and just as well. P is thoroughly evil and sickening. I am still hoping that Fin may prove his worth by siding with them against his brother. Very well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Fin is a disciple of Patrick. A conscience but little else. Thank you. Gretchen
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Jenny is really smart to hide the knives and to use wood to make the 911 sign on the roof of the shed. If only Patrick doesn't decide he needs a knife for something, and the police overfly her neighborhood and see the sign. That's a lot of "if onlys".
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Jenny is really smart to hide the knives and to use wood to make the 911 sign on the roof of the shed. If only Patrick doesn't decide he needs a knife for something, and the police overfly her neighborhood and see the sign. That's a lot of "if onlys".
Comment Written 19-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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That's what she is counting on. To be rescued. If only ... . Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Now she is thinking better. She should have spread them around. So she could get to them. She is still thinking like a victim. If she wishes to save herself, her brother and maybe even Finn, she needs to be thinking like Patrick would.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Now she is thinking better. She should have spread them around. So she could get to them. She is still thinking like a victim. If she wishes to save herself, her brother and maybe even Finn, she needs to be thinking like Patrick would.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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She's only seventeen so she just wants to survive. I thank you so much for this awesome review. Gretchen
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Gretchen,
I'm really enjoying this story, or parts of it at least. I'm hoping that the wrath of God is going to be visited upon Patrick soon. I hate the bastard, and he's not even real. Well done gal.
Blessings,
Tom
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Hello Gretchen,
I'm really enjoying this story, or parts of it at least. I'm hoping that the wrath of God is going to be visited upon Patrick soon. I hate the bastard, and he's not even real. Well done gal.
Blessings,
Tom
Comment Written 19-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Great response. I hated him too. Lol. Thanks for this awesome review. Gretchen
Comment from JSD
911 ! So clever. Didn't see that coming. Ingenious young lady. And now the knives have gone, although you'd think she'd secrete a steak knife up her sleeve and cut Patrick's balls off. Just hoping. Sorry. X
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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911 ! So clever. Didn't see that coming. Ingenious young lady. And now the knives have gone, although you'd think she'd secrete a steak knife up her sleeve and cut Patrick's balls off. Just hoping. Sorry. X
Comment Written 19-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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She probably never wants to get close enough to him again. But I like how you think. Lol. She's focused on survival. Thanks for this awesome review. Gretchen
