Creative Whispers
A poet without inspiration16 total reviews
Comment from cupa tea
Wonderful poem. Nice set up well delivered. I liked the picture that went with it. Got nothing to complain about.
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Wonderful poem. Nice set up well delivered. I liked the picture that went with it. Got nothing to complain about.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2014
Comment from J. P. Egry
Interesting that I just read a poem by Poetic Visionary with the very same theme. I love to see how differently poets can interpret the same theme/feeling/mood. Here, I like that the format is of metric and rhyming quatrains. Seem like the windows of the mind received some Windex so that now we're all able to see through them to enjoy this lovely poem.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Interesting that I just read a poem by Poetic Visionary with the very same theme. I love to see how differently poets can interpret the same theme/feeling/mood. Here, I like that the format is of metric and rhyming quatrains. Seem like the windows of the mind received some Windex so that now we're all able to see through them to enjoy this lovely poem.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Hi J.P. It was Poetic Visionary who inspired my poem! LOL I am a BIG fan of her writing snd consider her a wonderful friend too! Love your referral to using Windex on the windows of the mind. Who knew it would be so easy to re-connect with your muse again? You mentioned you enjoyed seeing how differant poets interpret the same circumstance, I Posted a poem on here a long time ago called, Ten Poets On a Mountain. It was to show how each poet would see and describe things differantly,when they were all in the same place. Thanks SO much for the wonderful review and thoughts! :o) Helvi
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hi there Nancy
I am struck with the fact that we all need to look at our muse in a different light. For me it is almost always the artwork that inspires me. I see that in this lovely piece. It is reflective of how it inspired your poetic heart to move and write. I love it and you. Have a wonderful weekend
Bear
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Hi there Nancy
I am struck with the fact that we all need to look at our muse in a different light. For me it is almost always the artwork that inspires me. I see that in this lovely piece. It is reflective of how it inspired your poetic heart to move and write. I love it and you. Have a wonderful weekend
Bear
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
Comment from Jewell McChesney
THIS is amazing! Oh to have inspired this beautiful work, I am HONORED! wow.I love it.I popped that poem out yesterday and hardly re-read it before posting.I just had to thrown some words out and get it flowing again.
I appreciate you so much my friend!
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THIS is amazing! Oh to have inspired this beautiful work, I am HONORED! wow.I love it.I popped that poem out yesterday and hardly re-read it before posting.I just had to thrown some words out and get it flowing again.
I appreciate you so much my friend!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
Comment from Mastery
Well, you certainly didn't run dry with this poem, Helvi. I loved thois poem and wish I had six stars left to give you. It deserves at least that many. It's so good to see your work again.
"When weary windows of my mind
Have nothing to express
I'm vanquished from the very world
That words so often blessed"
The stanza above is so well written...like a pro. Blessings, my friend. Bob
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Well, you certainly didn't run dry with this poem, Helvi. I loved thois poem and wish I had six stars left to give you. It deserves at least that many. It's so good to see your work again.
"When weary windows of my mind
Have nothing to express
I'm vanquished from the very world
That words so often blessed"
The stanza above is so well written...like a pro. Blessings, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
Hi Bob,
Thank you So much for your kind words and the cyber six rating! I am honored by both, especially since they come from you. Bessings My Friend! :o) Helvi
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Bless you, my friend. Bob
Comment from pattipac
Your lovely poem deserves a six, but, alas, I am all out of them. I am sure every poet/writer has found him/herself in your predicament at one time or another. With out a whispered thought,or theme the page remains vacant.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Your lovely poem deserves a six, but, alas, I am all out of them. I am sure every poet/writer has found him/herself in your predicament at one time or another. With out a whispered thought,or theme the page remains vacant.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Hi patti,
I will accept a cyber six very happily! Thank you for thinking this poem deserves one. I am honored! :o) Helvi
Comment from Gert sherwood
Such a nice poem Helvi2
Love how you wrote about how it feels when you are a poet and as you said - someon help me
Create the magic you possess
And let the sweet threads flow
Upon a page that is bare white
And needs a bit of glow
Gert
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Such a nice poem Helvi2
Love how you wrote about how it feels when you are a poet and as you said - someon help me
Create the magic you possess
And let the sweet threads flow
Upon a page that is bare white
And needs a bit of glow
Gert
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Hi Gert,
I think we all know this feeling well! Jewell inspired me to write the poem and it just took off. So glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks SO much for the review! :o) Helvi
Comment from Darshi04
That is such a strong poem. Second stanza is my favourite, and then "Please tickle me with lovely thoughts".
You've just tickled me with lovely lines.
Very well penned, Helvi. It was a pleasure stopping by!
P.S: Oh yes, nothing worse than finding oneself in that void, when you don't know what to write, what to think. When thoughts jumble up and all of a sudden we drift into vacuum. It's frustrating.
Now I think I know what you meant by "A poet without inspiration", though I hope the well deserved reviews will motivate you just well enough. ;)
Keep writing!
~Darshi
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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That is such a strong poem. Second stanza is my favourite, and then "Please tickle me with lovely thoughts".
You've just tickled me with lovely lines.
Very well penned, Helvi. It was a pleasure stopping by!
P.S: Oh yes, nothing worse than finding oneself in that void, when you don't know what to write, what to think. When thoughts jumble up and all of a sudden we drift into vacuum. It's frustrating.
Now I think I know what you meant by "A poet without inspiration", though I hope the well deserved reviews will motivate you just well enough. ;)
Keep writing!
~Darshi
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Hi Darshi,
Thank you for your phenomenal review it definitely left me smiling! I'm glad I tickled you with my thoughts. I love bringing joy to other people. I'm glad you stopped by to review.
Hugs and Smiles, Helvi
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Comment from Marillion
Inspiration is a beautiful thing, my friend, and you honor it and the process well in this one. Nicely handled meter, too, with only one suggestion from me:
Upon a page that is bare white (Upon a page that's bare and white...or barren white)
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Inspiration is a beautiful thing, my friend, and you honor it and the process well in this one. Nicely handled meter, too, with only one suggestion from me:
Upon a page that is bare white (Upon a page that's bare and white...or barren white)
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Oh My Gosh! What a lovely compliment! Thank you SO much David! I I am deeply honored by your kind words. I'm a tone deaf poet and for you to find just a tiny glitch in my work makes my heart smile. Appreciate your help on getting my meter back on track!
:o) Helvi
Comment from Janie King
Beautiful picture for sure. This is a dandy poem and very well-written. i never review on poetic style as I am not a poet and my ignorance would soon show. God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Beautiful picture for sure. This is a dandy poem and very well-written. i never review on poetic style as I am not a poet and my ignorance would soon show. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Hi Janie,
Just knowing you enjoyed the poem means a lot to me! When someone enjoys what I do I can't help but smile. I don't think anything is as awesome as that! Thanks for the Great review Janie! :o) Helvi
