The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 70 "Go with the Flow"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
23 total reviews
Comment from Sylvia Page
Poetry is like
the sunrise
occasionally a cloud
will block it's view
but sooner or later
we see the light
Liked that verse the best. The whole poem is gorgeous. Well done.
Cheers
Sylvia
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Poetry is like
the sunrise
occasionally a cloud
will block it's view
but sooner or later
we see the light
Liked that verse the best. The whole poem is gorgeous. Well done.
Cheers
Sylvia
Comment Written 24-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Thanks Sylvia, I appreciate your review and glad you liked Go With the Flow. I enjoyed writing it, love, Carolyn
Comment from lakeport
Go with the flow, indeed when the words flow the flow, That's a heartfelt expressed poem, and so true. I enjoyed reading it. God bless you, Hugs!Lakeport.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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Go with the flow, indeed when the words flow the flow, That's a heartfelt expressed poem, and so true. I enjoyed reading it. God bless you, Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much, :-)Carolyn
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your welcome.Hugs!lakeport.
Comment from MagKing
I like the flow, and the many senses you were making....It's a hard concept to come up with. But you are absolutely right; poetry is indeed like a water fall, and really is like the metaphors you used. How I wish this to be a contest....I would have voted it in....
MagKing
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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I like the flow, and the many senses you were making....It's a hard concept to come up with. But you are absolutely right; poetry is indeed like a water fall, and really is like the metaphors you used. How I wish this to be a contest....I would have voted it in....
MagKing
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments of encouragement. I am delighted you enjoyed 'Go with the Flow'. :-) Carolyn
Comment from adewpearl
I really like your creative similes as you describe the nature of poetry
revel in it's glow - drop the apostrophe
block it's view - drop the apostrophe
heart-shaped piece of chocolate - add the hyphen
this is wonderfully creative and whimsical :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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I really like your creative similes as you describe the nature of poetry
revel in it's glow - drop the apostrophe
block it's view - drop the apostrophe
heart-shaped piece of chocolate - add the hyphen
this is wonderfully creative and whimsical :-) Brooke
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Thanks Brooke, I'm glad you enjoyed Go with the Flow. Have a great day. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Helvi2
Hi Carolyn,
I DID have FUN reading this! LOL I agree with everything you said. LOVED the ending, you had me laughing there. Thanks SO much for the fun journey thought your poem and for the wonderful realization at the end.
Nice job of writing! :o) Helvi
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Hi Carolyn,
I DID have FUN reading this! LOL I agree with everything you said. LOVED the ending, you had me laughing there. Thanks SO much for the fun journey thought your poem and for the wonderful realization at the end.
Nice job of writing! :o) Helvi
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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I am so glad you enjoyed this one, it was also fun to write.
:-) Carolyn
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I could tell! LOL We all need things to brighten our day and this certainly did mine.Loved your quick change of thought at the end! :o)
Comment from Spitfire
Great similes and all with back-up to prove them. My favorite one:
Poetry is like
having a sibling
there is always
another person
who can relate
to your dilemma
A really cute fast paced ending.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Great similes and all with back-up to prove them. My favorite one:
Poetry is like
having a sibling
there is always
another person
who can relate
to your dilemma
A really cute fast paced ending.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Shari, thank you so much for this wonderful review and six stars. I am delighted you enjoyed the poem, Tell Frank hello.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from krys123
I liked all of your random thoughts a much and in fact I printed this I can put it on my writing table. Thank you so much for posting and sharing your work where everyone. May you have a good one and God bless.
Alex
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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I liked all of your random thoughts a much and in fact I printed this I can put it on my writing table. Thank you so much for posting and sharing your work where everyone. May you have a good one and God bless.
Alex
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Alex, I am delighted you enjoyed 'Go with the Flow' and that you printed it to have close by. Thank you for that honor. It was fun to write. :-) Carolyn
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You are so sincerely welcome Carolyn and I enjoyed it immensely.
Comment from country ranch writer
Oh! My! Do we have a chocolate rush going on here with this poem maybe????We all seem to like poetry even though it is tough to write for some of us with all the fang led styles.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Oh! My! Do we have a chocolate rush going on here with this poem maybe????We all seem to like poetry even though it is tough to write for some of us with all the fang led styles.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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What a fun review.. Thanks for the comments, :-) Carolyn
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welcome
Comment from angelface2
Carolyn, this was so good. I enjoyed every bit of it. I like the line about an invention. I sat today tweaking! I think it's about ready. LOL. Very nice poem. And I don't think you can ever write too many! Miss Sally
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Carolyn, this was so good. I enjoyed every bit of it. I like the line about an invention. I sat today tweaking! I think it's about ready. LOL. Very nice poem. And I don't think you can ever write too many! Miss Sally
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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I an delighted you enjoyed this poem and I'm overwhelmed at receiving a six star rating. Thank you so much, :-) Carolyn
Comment from Irish Rain
I did have fun reading this...I loved this...especially the part about chocolate! Great definitions of poetry! Blessings today!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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I did have fun reading this...I loved this...especially the part about chocolate! Great definitions of poetry! Blessings today!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Glad you enjoyed this one and thanks for the fun review. :-) Carolyn
