You'll Never Find
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Comment from ruzu27
Your great message comes so unexpectedly, Brooke. It's so true! Looking at the little smiling face I expected some sweet?
A very uplifting poem. Thank you so much for sharing. You are always a great inspiration for me and surely also for others.
Ruth
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Your great message comes so unexpectedly, Brooke. It's so true! Looking at the little smiling face I expected some sweet?
A very uplifting poem. Thank you so much for sharing. You are always a great inspiration for me and surely also for others.
Ruth
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Ruth, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Lulube
I love your imagery that packs a full message in it Brooke.
You're absolutely right about a smile. It can change your day in a flash. The smile seems to have an energy force behind it and that's what will touch you for change, if you're lucky enough to receive it. Still the sight of the smile is infectious to promote a smile back.
lulube
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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I love your imagery that packs a full message in it Brooke.
You're absolutely right about a smile. It can change your day in a flash. The smile seems to have an energy force behind it and that's what will touch you for change, if you're lucky enough to receive it. Still the sight of the smile is infectious to promote a smile back.
lulube
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Lulube, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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welcome Brooke
lulube
Comment from Lovinia
Hi Brooke
I'm so pleased you identified the red goo ... I thought for a minute sawyer was eating red paint. lol That does look like one yummy cupcake. Please ask Miranda to Fed-Ex me a few?? Pay on delivery. lol My sister-in-law used to make the best cupcakes except for she used a glazed icing, I like the frosting.
You're quite right ... nothing beats a smile ... and that little smiling face is one in a million. As I read, my eye wanders to your profile page ... two gorgeous images .. a beautifully natured young man.
I'll have to look up my ice-cream faces and possibly I recall a cup-cake face .... I love my photos of my son's early childhood ... I think I might rival Miranda on photographically recording every moment .... most people thought I was nuts with my camera. somedays I had the camera and the video. Today they come together ... much easier than one in each hand. heheh!
I hope the snow has let you outdoors. Maureen says they are forecasting warmer weather for her for next week. Ah .... spring is in the air!! It's been cool today and overcast here .... though the evening is becoming muggy.
I love the wonderful visuals you provide in your poem ... all splendid ... just can't beat that smile. Beautiful. Warm Hugs - Lovinia xooxxo
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Hi Brooke
I'm so pleased you identified the red goo ... I thought for a minute sawyer was eating red paint. lol That does look like one yummy cupcake. Please ask Miranda to Fed-Ex me a few?? Pay on delivery. lol My sister-in-law used to make the best cupcakes except for she used a glazed icing, I like the frosting.
You're quite right ... nothing beats a smile ... and that little smiling face is one in a million. As I read, my eye wanders to your profile page ... two gorgeous images .. a beautifully natured young man.
I'll have to look up my ice-cream faces and possibly I recall a cup-cake face .... I love my photos of my son's early childhood ... I think I might rival Miranda on photographically recording every moment .... most people thought I was nuts with my camera. somedays I had the camera and the video. Today they come together ... much easier than one in each hand. heheh!
I hope the snow has let you outdoors. Maureen says they are forecasting warmer weather for her for next week. Ah .... spring is in the air!! It's been cool today and overcast here .... though the evening is becoming muggy.
I love the wonderful visuals you provide in your poem ... all splendid ... just can't beat that smile. Beautiful. Warm Hugs - Lovinia xooxxo
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Miranda is no cook/baker - I would guarantee her cupcakes are from a box :-) She has many talents, none in the kitchen. LOL
I am still inside, since Feb 2. The latest snow is just ending as we speak. They say the temps are warming up the end of this week, so I am hoping to be able to move my car by Friday. Thanks so much for your lovely comments and positive rating :-) Brooke
Comment from Irish Rain
Valentine cupcake was delicious I'll bet, he thought! What beautiful truths in your lovely poem about the true value of life..Blessings tonight!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Valentine cupcake was delicious I'll bet, he thought! What beautiful truths in your lovely poem about the true value of life..Blessings tonight!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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justjo, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from AnnieGale
I find this very beautiful and simply true...for everything around us does matter, but none more than a persons smiling face. Makes everything so right with the world...cute photo also
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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I find this very beautiful and simply true...for everything around us does matter, but none more than a persons smiling face. Makes everything so right with the world...cute photo also
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Annie Gale, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from 24chas
What a great message, Brooke. I could really picture this on a poster in the Hallmark store. Loved the way it flowed and the rhyme scheme as well. Nice job.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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What a great message, Brooke. I could really picture this on a poster in the Hallmark store. Loved the way it flowed and the rhyme scheme as well. Nice job.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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24chas, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from w.j.debi
Another new form of poetry for me to learn about. I like thr abab ccdd rhyme scheme. Do you try a new poetry form every day?
This is a charming and uplifting verse. There is such joy in Sawyer's eyes to compliment your message.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Another new form of poetry for me to learn about. I like thr abab ccdd rhyme scheme. Do you try a new poetry form every day?
This is a charming and uplifting verse. There is such joy in Sawyer's eyes to compliment your message.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much, debi - when I first joined the site I was trying out new forms a lot. Now that I've been here a long while, there aren't nearly as many times a form I use is new to me :-) Brooke
Comment from jluzzle
This was a pleasurable piece to read and review. I had to read it a few times, but only because I wanted to take it in a different way. Your poem is easy to read and has a nice meaning. to tickle a smile onto the face of a child...
Nice write...
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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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This was a pleasurable piece to read and review. I had to read it a few times, but only because I wanted to take it in a different way. Your poem is easy to read and has a nice meaning. to tickle a smile onto the face of a child...
Nice write...
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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jluzzle, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Cajungirl
Especially when that smiling face is extra sugary sweet. Outstanding job, once again, Brooke. It is easy to see you all had a Sweet Sawyer Valentine's Day.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Especially when that smiling face is extra sugary sweet. Outstanding job, once again, Brooke. It is easy to see you all had a Sweet Sawyer Valentine's Day.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Cajungirl, thank ybou so very much for your gracious and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
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you are welcome
Comment from chasennov
'You'll Never Find.' This is another very well thought out poem you have created here, Brooke. Smiles are really all it needs to lighten up some sour faces. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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'You'll Never Find.' This is another very well thought out poem you have created here, Brooke. Smiles are really all it needs to lighten up some sour faces. Well done.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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chasennov, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are most welcome, Brooke.
