You'll Never Find
A Rispetto175 total reviews
Comment from nomi338
The smiling face of a beloved grandchild, their warm embrace. These are the things that can make the worst day in your life seem really not so bad at all. You quickly learn what is really important in life. Thank you for the reminder.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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The smiling face of a beloved grandchild, their warm embrace. These are the things that can make the worst day in your life seem really not so bad at all. You quickly learn what is really important in life. Thank you for the reminder.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Thank you so very much, nomi :-) Brooke
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Brooke:-)
"You'll Never Find" is a delightfully excellent poem in rispetto form. It meets the rhyme scheme requirements of
acbd aacc in first and second stanzas and the iambic tetrameter requirement. It has good rhyme and excellent figurative language and imagery (lofty heights where eagles fly)
Preston
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
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Hi, Brooke:-)
"You'll Never Find" is a delightfully excellent poem in rispetto form. It meets the rhyme scheme requirements of
acbd aacc in first and second stanzas and the iambic tetrameter requirement. It has good rhyme and excellent figurative language and imagery (lofty heights where eagles fly)
Preston
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
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Preston, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh Brooke, this is the sweetest poem and picture yet! I'm welling up again, for pure joy! Woman, your talent is just amazing, and that child is the most handsome, cutest little kid!!!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Oh Brooke, this is the sweetest poem and picture yet! I'm welling up again, for pure joy! Woman, your talent is just amazing, and that child is the most handsome, cutest little kid!!!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Dawn, thank you so very much. I so appreciate your genuine reaction and generous exceptional rating :-) Yeah, he is such a cutie even when covered in icing. LOL Brooke
Comment from madhatter1977
Lovely poem in an easy to understand style and what a good message for all of us. Well done, Brooke, best wishes, Pete :)
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Lovely poem in an easy to understand style and what a good message for all of us. Well done, Brooke, best wishes, Pete :)
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Pete, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You're welcome, Brooke. Best wishes, Pete :)
Comment from MM lives on :)
WOW, Pretty soon Sawyer will be a celebrity model with all the exposure he is getting...lol the face is too precious and what a mess he has made. EXCELLENT WORK!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
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WOW, Pretty soon Sawyer will be a celebrity model with all the exposure he is getting...lol the face is too precious and what a mess he has made. EXCELLENT WORK!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
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Christopher, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Aussie
Crikey! Red mud man. Loved your children's poem - nothing in the world can beat the smile of a child and the laughter that follows makes our hearts glad - children's laughter is light and lovely with no hint of greed or sorrow. Excellent.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Crikey! Red mud man. Loved your children's poem - nothing in the world can beat the smile of a child and the laughter that follows makes our hearts glad - children's laughter is light and lovely with no hint of greed or sorrow. Excellent.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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thank you so much, Kay - he is a cutie covered in icing :-) Brooke
Comment from Donya Quijote
Charming, sweet, delicious and full of wisdom. It's the simple things are important and wonderful. Oh, and I forgot to mention bounce in this whimsical and joyful ride. Smooth flow, easy rhyme, fine sound effects when read aloud. Just one question for you: would it be inappropriate star and sun as if they are proper names? They are personified in this shinning gem of a poem. I would like to know your thoughts but you are under no obligation. Just wondering....
Give you a six if I could. Guess it gets lost in the basis math I have to do just to prove I'm human. Nice poem with a warm and fuzzy feeling. Glad I stopped by today...
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Charming, sweet, delicious and full of wisdom. It's the simple things are important and wonderful. Oh, and I forgot to mention bounce in this whimsical and joyful ride. Smooth flow, easy rhyme, fine sound effects when read aloud. Just one question for you: would it be inappropriate star and sun as if they are proper names? They are personified in this shinning gem of a poem. I would like to know your thoughts but you are under no obligation. Just wondering....
Give you a six if I could. Guess it gets lost in the basis math I have to do just to prove I'm human. Nice poem with a warm and fuzzy feeling. Glad I stopped by today...
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Donya, thank you so very much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from ravenblack
Life's greatest gift is in the simple, everyday miracles that keep us living, laughing and loving. We do tend to forget though and can't help but see something like a mountain as more awe inspiring. Have to stop and smell the roses in order to appreciate the smaller things.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Life's greatest gift is in the simple, everyday miracles that keep us living, laughing and loving. We do tend to forget though and can't help but see something like a mountain as more awe inspiring. Have to stop and smell the roses in order to appreciate the smaller things.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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ravenblack, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from words
Oh, I love this one,Brooke.
I was just thinking the same thing the other day when i was babysitting my grandchildren.
Have been all over the word ? but, couldn't say that I would rather be in Paris than to be just hugging my grandbabies. Did not expect to love them so much. Sigh ?..
Hugs, d
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Oh, I love this one,Brooke.
I was just thinking the same thing the other day when i was babysitting my grandchildren.
Have been all over the word ? but, couldn't say that I would rather be in Paris than to be just hugging my grandbabies. Did not expect to love them so much. Sigh ?..
Hugs, d
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Diane, thank you, my friend :-) Yeah, you wait all your life to be a grandma and you've heard everyone talk about what a great experience it is, but you never really expect it to be quite this good :-) Brooke
Comment from RYME4U
This is excellent I sighed and said "aw" when I read it. Sweet words and delightful rhythm. You are so right. A smiling face on a child is the best gift of all.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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This is excellent I sighed and said "aw" when I read it. Sweet words and delightful rhythm. You are so right. A smiling face on a child is the best gift of all.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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RYME4U, thank you so much :-) Brooke
