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A Rispetto175 total reviews
Comment from kiwijenny
Delightful....sawyer's cupcake face is delightful...and sweet...so is the message.......just find the nearest smiling face,,,for there lives life in all it's grace.........................
God bless
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Delightful....sawyer's cupcake face is delightful...and sweet...so is the message.......just find the nearest smiling face,,,for there lives life in all it's grace.........................
God bless
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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thank you so much, kiwijenny :-) Brooke
Comment from krys123
Sorry are really heating this so is he wearing it. I believe he's doing a little bit of both here. Chuckle! Chuckle! Your rhymes are neither forced, labored or strained in the rhythm was simple and flowed smoothly. Thank you for a very creative and well conceived poem. Thanks for sharing and posting it also. You have a good one in God bless.
Alex
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Sorry are really heating this so is he wearing it. I believe he's doing a little bit of both here. Chuckle! Chuckle! Your rhymes are neither forced, labored or strained in the rhythm was simple and flowed smoothly. Thank you for a very creative and well conceived poem. Thanks for sharing and posting it also. You have a good one in God bless.
Alex
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much, Alex :-) Brooke
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You are so welcome Brooke...
Alex
Comment from l.raven
OMG Brooke, did he get any inside his month??? he making me hungry...LOL...you know I love Sawyer...he's a keeper...a great poem...and precious picture...Luff Linda xoo
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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OMG Brooke, did he get any inside his month??? he making me hungry...LOL...you know I love Sawyer...he's a keeper...a great poem...and precious picture...Luff Linda xoo
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Linda, I'm pretty sure some made its way into his tummy. LOL Thanks so much :-) Brooke
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I bet it did...LOL...your welcome...xxoo
Comment from livelylinda
Brooke: the smiling face says so much when the eyes smile with it. Sometimes people make their mouth smile but their eyes say something much different. I'm babbling on and on because I have run out of words to tell you how much I appreciate and enjoy your poetry and pictures of Sawyer. Linda
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Brooke: the smiling face says so much when the eyes smile with it. Sometimes people make their mouth smile but their eyes say something much different. I'm babbling on and on because I have run out of words to tell you how much I appreciate and enjoy your poetry and pictures of Sawyer. Linda
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Linda, I so agree - people do need to smile with their eyes :-) Thanks so much for your review. Brooke
Comment from Kausar_Javeria
This poem...it is..it is..I have no words! You've described something which is true but what most of us almost always overlook! Yes, that's life's greatest gift!
God Bless!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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This poem...it is..it is..I have no words! You've described something which is true but what most of us almost always overlook! Yes, that's life's greatest gift!
God Bless!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Kausar, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Leineco
I can always count on you for a smile :-)
A lovely message about how people, and their genuine smiles brighten our days the most? . . . or
A reminder that there is so much more to write poetry about, than Mother Nature's gifts?
LOL. . .or maybe I'm just reading too much into it ;-)
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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I can always count on you for a smile :-)
A lovely message about how people, and their genuine smiles brighten our days the most? . . . or
A reminder that there is so much more to write poetry about, than Mother Nature's gifts?
LOL. . .or maybe I'm just reading too much into it ;-)
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much, Leineco. I've written my fair share of mother nature poems, but yes, there is more to appreciate about life :-) Brooke
Comment from Lovewritingstuff
This is such a cute poem, full of joy and happiness and so genuine.
Surely best things in life come from simple things such as a smile, a kiss or a gentle word.
The rhyming is really smooth and really enjoyed the content and word choice.
Excellent work.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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This is such a cute poem, full of joy and happiness and so genuine.
Surely best things in life come from simple things such as a smile, a kiss or a gentle word.
The rhyming is really smooth and really enjoyed the content and word choice.
Excellent work.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much for your generous sixth star and gracious comments, Lovewritingstuff :-) Brooke
Comment from curious novice
What I love best about this is how the "nearest smiling face" is greatest even relative to all those other wonders and gifts of grace. "Sun's first kiss," "star's last wink," "heights where eagles fly," "glaciers slow," "rivers swift," and "canyons wide," all are magnificent gifts in there own right, which just points out how truly marvelous the "nearest smiling face" really is. No natural wonder outshines a human smile (especially one as endearing as red-splashed Sawyer's).
A smile, or in this case, a positive sentiment shared with others in a lovely rispetto, is a powerful elixir for those wearied by the world.
I love the journey even these few short lines and images takes me on. What an original thought "star's last wink" is. Thanks for sharing this one, Brooke. Happy holiday weekend. Stay safe and warm. Andy
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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What I love best about this is how the "nearest smiling face" is greatest even relative to all those other wonders and gifts of grace. "Sun's first kiss," "star's last wink," "heights where eagles fly," "glaciers slow," "rivers swift," and "canyons wide," all are magnificent gifts in there own right, which just points out how truly marvelous the "nearest smiling face" really is. No natural wonder outshines a human smile (especially one as endearing as red-splashed Sawyer's).
A smile, or in this case, a positive sentiment shared with others in a lovely rispetto, is a powerful elixir for those wearied by the world.
I love the journey even these few short lines and images takes me on. What an original thought "star's last wink" is. Thanks for sharing this one, Brooke. Happy holiday weekend. Stay safe and warm. Andy
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much, Andy :-) I appreciate your attentive comments. Brooke
Comment from Eliane Rabello
Brooke, I cried reading this, but they were happy tears. It took me back to great childhood memories. Thanks for having written it. It's breathtaking for a change. I just love how perfect your rhyming feels. When, Brooke? When will the world know the mastery of your poetry? You're being selfish not allowing poetry lovers all over the world to be touched by your words. Sorry. I have to say. Maybe you should mute me. LOL Otherwise, I'll never stop harassing you to go take your spot in the bestseller list. You're incredible, my dear friend. It's a pleasure to have found you!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Brooke, I cried reading this, but they were happy tears. It took me back to great childhood memories. Thanks for having written it. It's breathtaking for a change. I just love how perfect your rhyming feels. When, Brooke? When will the world know the mastery of your poetry? You're being selfish not allowing poetry lovers all over the world to be touched by your words. Sorry. I have to say. Maybe you should mute me. LOL Otherwise, I'll never stop harassing you to go take your spot in the bestseller list. You're incredible, my dear friend. It's a pleasure to have found you!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Eliane, thank you for the encouragement and your generosity. You're the best, my generous friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Terrie DeGolier
The greatest gift is the love in a child's eyes, but seeing the stars, the rivers, mountains, all of God's splendor then he really learns the to love mankind and will live in grace. Terrie....
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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The greatest gift is the love in a child's eyes, but seeing the stars, the rivers, mountains, all of God's splendor then he really learns the to love mankind and will live in grace. Terrie....
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Terrie, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
