You'll Never Find
A Rispetto175 total reviews
Comment from Kashif Ali Abbas
Yeah, we may never find what life is. Your philosophical subject is truly intriguing.
You'll never find life's greatest gift
in star's last wink nor sun's first kiss,
in glaciers slow nor rivers swift,
nor canyons wide, no none of this. [ good lines]
K
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Yeah, we may never find what life is. Your philosophical subject is truly intriguing.
You'll never find life's greatest gift
in star's last wink nor sun's first kiss,
in glaciers slow nor rivers swift,
nor canyons wide, no none of this. [ good lines]
K
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Kashif, I have not seen you in ages. Thanks so much for reviewing :-) Brooke
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Yes, I am back. It is so great to see your lovely work and talk with people like you.
have a good day Brooke
K
Comment from Dom G Robles
Pretty poem with the picture of a child, mouth smeared red something like from a strawberry cake. The author says one can not find life's gift further away from where you are...in glaciers or rivers or wide canyons or lofty heights where birds fly...just find the nearest smiling face "for there lives life in blissful grace." Congratulations. Dom
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Pretty poem with the picture of a child, mouth smeared red something like from a strawberry cake. The author says one can not find life's gift further away from where you are...in glaciers or rivers or wide canyons or lofty heights where birds fly...just find the nearest smiling face "for there lives life in blissful grace." Congratulations. Dom
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Dom, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
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You are very welcome Brooke. Dom
Comment from Paddywack
Too true, Brooke. Other than the cry of a new born child, there's nothing stirs the heart more than a smile from the innocent.
Paddy
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Too true, Brooke. Other than the cry of a new born child, there's nothing stirs the heart more than a smile from the innocent.
Paddy
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Paddy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dibul
That's a perfect poem for the Valentines Day. :) Beautifully written with perfect rhymes and meter.
"In star's last wink nor sun's first kiss".. good one! Your poem is fresh as always and conveys a great message.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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That's a perfect poem for the Valentines Day. :) Beautifully written with perfect rhymes and meter.
"In star's last wink nor sun's first kiss".. good one! Your poem is fresh as always and conveys a great message.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Divya, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from bob cullen
Simply beautiful. Your words always convey the most joyful sentiments.
Your rhyme is precise and the words flow with sweet rhythm, just like real poetry should.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
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Simply beautiful. Your words always convey the most joyful sentiments.
Your rhyme is precise and the words flow with sweet rhythm, just like real poetry should.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, Bob :-) Brooke
Comment from IndianaIrish
How is it that Sawyer gets cuter with each picture I see? Great poem that gives us reasons to find one of the most best things in life in a smiling face. Loved reading this one, Brooke.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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How is it that Sawyer gets cuter with each picture I see? Great poem that gives us reasons to find one of the most best things in life in a smiling face. Loved reading this one, Brooke.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Karyn, thank you so much :-) And he does get cuter and cuter somehow :-) Brooke
Comment from Spitfire
What a great picture. Will he ever laugh at this when he's sixteen and trying to impress a girl. It's true. In spite of nature's breathtaking beauty, it's a sincere smile that makes us feel good inside.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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What a great picture. Will he ever laugh at this when he's sixteen and trying to impress a girl. It's true. In spite of nature's breathtaking beauty, it's a sincere smile that makes us feel good inside.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Spitfire, thank you so much :-) I have long since warned his mother that she better lock up all these embarrassing baby pics when Sawyer is a teen. LOL Brooke
Comment from L.A.Matthies
My day just isn't as complete without something sweet and innocent for your pen. Thank you, Brooke, for sharing a glimpse of Sawyer accompanied by your lovely piece :)Linda
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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My day just isn't as complete without something sweet and innocent for your pen. Thank you, Brooke, for sharing a glimpse of Sawyer accompanied by your lovely piece :)Linda
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Lighthouse Keeper
It's a life well lived and priorities well sorted that allows for the consistent flow of such charming verse with such smooth, seemingly effortless flow. Yet another fine message well delivered by a well crafted verse.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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It's a life well lived and priorities well sorted that allows for the consistent flow of such charming verse with such smooth, seemingly effortless flow. Yet another fine message well delivered by a well crafted verse.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Lighthouse Keeper, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from CR Delport
A smiling face say so much, and evoke such a nice emotion. If it is from the Cute Little One, even more so. Thank you for sharing another gem.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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A smiling face say so much, and evoke such a nice emotion. If it is from the Cute Little One, even more so. Thank you for sharing another gem.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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CR, thank you so much :-) Brooke
