Comment from judester

Excellent

I like this. I will give my review when I read the previous chapters. Great writing and I look forward to catching up. cheers Judester

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014

Can't wait to hear your take on this one, Jude.

Thanks so much for stopping by, see you soon,

Hugs,
Gayle

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

Good description in the opening lines that reveal the setting. Good transition between the events. Good character balance. Good dialogue between the characters. Nice steady pace leading to a tedious and exhausting conclusion.

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 Comment Written 15-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014

Lol, sorry about that. I had to break the chapter there for FS, but it's part of an even longer one.

Sorry about that, but I hope you'll check out the next chapter.

Thanks,
Gayle

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

One of the biggest I have seen is a stranger petting a seeing eye dog. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.

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 Comment Written 15-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014

Hey Charlie,

It's crazy, isn't it. People just don't realize and it's truly fascinating to watch these dogs work.

Hope you have a great weekend, my friend,

Big thanks and hugs,
Gayle

reply by c_lucas on 15-Feb-2014

You're welcome, Gayle. Charlie