Artistry
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Comment from rouskin
Your write enshrines a profound truth :Talent is
unlimited when instinct is the teacher. Perfect Whitney I enjoyed reading it very much
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Your write enshrines a profound truth :Talent is
unlimited when instinct is the teacher. Perfect Whitney I enjoyed reading it very much
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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rouskin, thank you for your insightful comments and generous rating :-) Brooke
Comment from TAB_that's me
I've proudly displayed many a picture on my refrigerator - kids and now grandkids. Nice whitney style poem Brooke.
~Teresa~
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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I've proudly displayed many a picture on my refrigerator - kids and now grandkids. Nice whitney style poem Brooke.
~Teresa~
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Teresa, thank you so much. I have framed art from Miranda and her brother on my walls to this day :-) I can't wait to add a few from Sawyer :-) Brooke
Comment from ravenblack
Did you know that in most Native American cultures they did not even have a word for artist. To be an artist was just looked at as a natural state. And you are right- talent requires that we not shy away from our instincts.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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Did you know that in most Native American cultures they did not even have a word for artist. To be an artist was just looked at as a natural state. And you are right- talent requires that we not shy away from our instincts.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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ravenblack, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I can see Sawyer losing his baby features and becoming more of a tot than a toddler. He is growing fast. This is a poem with a very good point. Some people just have a talent for certain things where others just want to. Good job. Brooke.
(You are going to need a very big box!)
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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I can see Sawyer losing his baby features and becoming more of a tot than a toddler. He is growing fast. This is a poem with a very good point. Some people just have a talent for certain things where others just want to. Good job. Brooke.
(You are going to need a very big box!)
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Thank you so very much, Nancy - yes, he is growing far too fast for me. I want every day to last three days :-) Brooke
Comment from fastdigits
Words of truth spoken here,
where the commentary is
instinct that surely comes
from the heart is the cornerstone
of the unlimited talent that lays
dormant in all.
Well done
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2014
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Words of truth spoken here,
where the commentary is
instinct that surely comes
from the heart is the cornerstone
of the unlimited talent that lays
dormant in all.
Well done
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2014
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fastdigits, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from royowen
I sometimes struggle with the point of these,poetic forms, I can see,the point in the challenge of getting as much as possible out of what is very limiting in its width and depth of expression! Your work is so much better in the traditional forms. I'm sorry for the tirade to one who is as eminent as yourself! But you do fulfil the requirements of this poetic disciple, I admire your view but not its sentiment. I believe that humans are more than animals, but sometimes less. Blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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I sometimes struggle with the point of these,poetic forms, I can see,the point in the challenge of getting as much as possible out of what is very limiting in its width and depth of expression! Your work is so much better in the traditional forms. I'm sorry for the tirade to one who is as eminent as yourself! But you do fulfil the requirements of this poetic disciple, I admire your view but not its sentiment. I believe that humans are more than animals, but sometimes less. Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Thank you for your thoughtful feedback, Roy :-) Brooke
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this whitney poem about the art that comes from the heart. I love the picture. he is just too cute.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this whitney poem about the art that comes from the heart. I love the picture. he is just too cute.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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sweetwoodjax, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Gungalo
Artistry
flows through the veins
of every
living creature.
Talent is
unlimited
when instinct is the teacher.
Awesome Brooke and a wonderful message to everyone out here. He'll make a wonderful valentine.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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Artistry
flows through the veins
of every
living creature.
Talent is
unlimited
when instinct is the teacher.
Awesome Brooke and a wonderful message to everyone out here. He'll make a wonderful valentine.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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Gungalo, thanks so much :-) Brooke
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Smile.
Comment from Emeka13
Best to start them young. Sawyer getting ready for the canvass. Just wondering if he has ever drawn a picture of grandma and what does it look like? Too young yet I suppose. Drawing was never my thing no matter how hard I tried. I suppose poetry could be said to be branch of art that took my fancy. You are right. Instinct is a good teacher. Thanks for this. Emeka
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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Best to start them young. Sawyer getting ready for the canvass. Just wondering if he has ever drawn a picture of grandma and what does it look like? Too young yet I suppose. Drawing was never my thing no matter how hard I tried. I suppose poetry could be said to be branch of art that took my fancy. You are right. Instinct is a good teacher. Thanks for this. Emeka
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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Emeka, thank you so much :-) He is just 21 months old, so the little drawing he has done so far consists of scribbles :-) Brooke
Comment from Marillion
I couldn't agree more, Brooke! Interesting decision to format it this way, but it balances well. Trochaic hexameter with feminine endings? Great choice for this epigram of sorts. Sawyer looks like he's well-organized for the task.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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I couldn't agree more, Brooke! Interesting decision to format it this way, but it balances well. Trochaic hexameter with feminine endings? Great choice for this epigram of sorts. Sawyer looks like he's well-organized for the task.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, Dave :-) Brooke
