They Claim a Cupcake's Missing
rhyming quatrains207 total reviews
Comment from GentleWind
This is the cutest poem and picture. Loved the perfect rhyme. Sawyer said all the right things! Wonderful children's poem. Great job
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This is the cutest poem and picture. Loved the perfect rhyme. Sawyer said all the right things! Wonderful children's poem. Great job
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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GentleWind, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from CowboyToo
Really cute little poem. I want to read it to my grandchildren as soon as we get together (next week) I think they will laugh.
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Really cute little poem. I want to read it to my grandchildren as soon as we get together (next week) I think they will laugh.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Cowboy Too thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from RodG
Hi Brooke, I am always glad to share another of your children's poems. I like how the Speaker of this one sounds just like Edgar G. Robinson in "Little Caesar" when he says "cut a guy a break" and "the thief is clever, he got away scot-free."
Fun to see how he innocently denies the evidence. Rod
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Hi Brooke, I am always glad to share another of your children's poems. I like how the Speaker of this one sounds just like Edgar G. Robinson in "Little Caesar" when he says "cut a guy a break" and "the thief is clever, he got away scot-free."
Fun to see how he innocently denies the evidence. Rod
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Rod, thank you so much :-) I love Robinson and the gangster movies of that time. Brooke
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
That's cute. We bought some cupcakes at the store yesterday and seemed my daughter was sure having more than her fair share. This reminded me of that as she drops one frosting first on the floor. LOL Great rhythm and rhyme.
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That's cute. We bought some cupcakes at the store yesterday and seemed my daughter was sure having more than her fair share. This reminded me of that as she drops one frosting first on the floor. LOL Great rhythm and rhyme.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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JoLynn, thank you so much for your review and for that delightful story :-) Brooke
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! This poem is adorable! The author words flowed so well. The words used matched the expression on Sawyer's face! The poem was a delightful read and made me smile. Thank you, harmony13
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Excellent Poem! This poem is adorable! The author words flowed so well. The words used matched the expression on Sawyer's face! The poem was a delightful read and made me smile. Thank you, harmony13
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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harmony, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Tonulak
DEar Brooke,
Ah...the fox comes out of the henhouse with feathers on his muzzle:) Well, let's hope it wasn't Grandma's cupcake at any rate. Very charming write--Ted
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DEar Brooke,
Ah...the fox comes out of the henhouse with feathers on his muzzle:) Well, let's hope it wasn't Grandma's cupcake at any rate. Very charming write--Ted
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Ted, thanks so much :-) I love my cake, but Sawyer can always have mine if he wants it :-) Brooke
Comment from HAREEDS
A humorous plea of innocence from an obviously guilty child. The temptation has proved too much, something most kids must
have battled with after mum's just baked. The poem catches the innocence of childhood in well structured verse. A very enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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A humorous plea of innocence from an obviously guilty child. The temptation has proved too much, something most kids must
have battled with after mum's just baked. The poem catches the innocence of childhood in well structured verse. A very enjoyable read.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
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Hareeds, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from allborn66
This is a very delightful poem. The rhyming scheme enhances the piece. The word choice paints a vivid picture. I remember catching my second in the refrigerator when he was about three, mouth covered in Parmesan cheese. "what are you eating?" "Nothing."
Barbara
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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This is a very delightful poem. The rhyming scheme enhances the piece. The word choice paints a vivid picture. I remember catching my second in the refrigerator when he was about three, mouth covered in Parmesan cheese. "what are you eating?" "Nothing."
Barbara
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
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Barbara, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Harborvu
Awww, cute ! And the photo fits in perfectly with the subject matter. It's evocative, witty and sweet - just like the missing cupcake (I am sure).
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Awww, cute ! And the photo fits in perfectly with the subject matter. It's evocative, witty and sweet - just like the missing cupcake (I am sure).
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Harborvu, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from BCScot
Very cute poem, and I love the pic as well. Written from the child's (innocent?) point of view is a great way to get this often accusatory point across. Thanks for sharing, I always enjoy the poetry about your family.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Very cute poem, and I love the pic as well. Written from the child's (innocent?) point of view is a great way to get this often accusatory point across. Thanks for sharing, I always enjoy the poetry about your family.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
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BCScot, thank you so much :-) Brooke
