They Claim a Cupcake's Missing
rhyming quatrains207 total reviews
Comment from James Sarzotti
This is a fun one. Entertaining pic.
I know my lips are coated,
but cut a guy a break --
there isn't any way to prove
it's icing from this cake. << He's got us there.
I say the thief is clever,
he got away scot-free.
The only thing I know for sure --
the culprit isn't me. << This must be the cupcake defense instead of the Twinkies one.
Great stuff.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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This is a fun one. Entertaining pic.
I know my lips are coated,
but cut a guy a break --
there isn't any way to prove
it's icing from this cake. << He's got us there.
I say the thief is clever,
he got away scot-free.
The only thing I know for sure --
the culprit isn't me. << This must be the cupcake defense instead of the Twinkies one.
Great stuff.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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James, thank you for the laugh and the review :-) Yep, the cupcake defense lives on! :-) Brooke
Comment from in777wr#
This was a very humorous poem. He look so innocent in the picture. LOL. The poem reads, and flows well. You could feel for the little guy. A nice warm hearted poem.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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This was a very humorous poem. He look so innocent in the picture. LOL. The poem reads, and flows well. You could feel for the little guy. A nice warm hearted poem.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Arthur, thank you so very much for your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from lakeport
They claim a cupcake's is missing,what a cute picture, little Sawyer trying to look innocent, that's a very lovely and humorous poem,I enjoyed reading it.God bless you.Hugs!lakeport.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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They claim a cupcake's is missing,what a cute picture, little Sawyer trying to look innocent, that's a very lovely and humorous poem,I enjoyed reading it.God bless you.Hugs!lakeport.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Lakeport, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
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your welcome.Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment from Lena Borghi
Hello Brooke,
Love this wonderful anecdote you have crafted into rhyming quatrains. The poem flows well and was good rhythm. Alternate rhymes are solid.
Sawyer looks so grown up! They're turning into boys, no longer babies. I know he is going to give you material to spare!
Enjoyed reading this!
Lena
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Hello Brooke,
Love this wonderful anecdote you have crafted into rhyming quatrains. The poem flows well and was good rhythm. Alternate rhymes are solid.
Sawyer looks so grown up! They're turning into boys, no longer babies. I know he is going to give you material to spare!
Enjoyed reading this!
Lena
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Lena, thank you so very much. Yes, they grow up far far too fast :-) Brooke
Comment from JoshuaFrame
Your poems are always fun loving and enjoyable to read. Not many people these days can make things both intriguing and family friendly. You have a gift.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Your poems are always fun loving and enjoyable to read. Not many people these days can make things both intriguing and family friendly. You have a gift.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Joshua, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from ruminative scribbler
Wonderful Brooke!:)
Cut a guy a break lol...how could we resist that plea from such an adorable little fellow.
Thank you for sharing this lovely photo and inspired writing.
Best wishes,
Donna
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Wonderful Brooke!:)
Cut a guy a break lol...how could we resist that plea from such an adorable little fellow.
Thank you for sharing this lovely photo and inspired writing.
Best wishes,
Donna
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Donna, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, this was brilliant, Brooke, and Sawyer was such a delight! Loved this picture of him. Great rhymes, rhythm and cadence.
Favorite lines:
I know my lips are coated,
but cut a guy a break --
there isn't any way to prove
it's icing from this cake.
Last stanza made me smile. Such an adorble little boy! And he is our star.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Oh, this was brilliant, Brooke, and Sawyer was such a delight! Loved this picture of him. Great rhymes, rhythm and cadence.
Favorite lines:
I know my lips are coated,
but cut a guy a break --
there isn't any way to prove
it's icing from this cake.
Last stanza made me smile. Such an adorble little boy! And he is our star.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Yelena, I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. He is such a charmer. I appreciate your generous sixth star,too :-) Brooke
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He is a great charmer. Look at my latest, if you can. I think it will amuse you.
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I just did :-)
Comment from dmt1967
This is funny lol I love the way a child is covered in chocolate and denies being anywhere near the sweaty jar lol my kid blamed the dog lol thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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This is funny lol I love the way a child is covered in chocolate and denies being anywhere near the sweaty jar lol my kid blamed the dog lol thank you for sharing
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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dmt, thank you so very much :-) I appreciate your laugh and your generous review. Brooke
Comment from pattipac
Cute quatrain poem about an adorable pint-sized thief with coated-sweet-lips. I'll lay odds that everyone cuts this guy a break.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Cute quatrain poem about an adorable pint-sized thief with coated-sweet-lips. I'll lay odds that everyone cuts this guy a break.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Patti, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from hotstuff
Hi,what a thrill to read your poetry again and this one is so funny and cute. Loved the easy flow and the humour. It was a pleasure to read.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Hi,what a thrill to read your poetry again and this one is so funny and cute. Loved the easy flow and the humour. It was a pleasure to read.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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hotstuff, thank you so much :-) Brooke
