Comment from Lynette Marie

Excellent

This is such an adorable poem. You capture the mischievousness of childhood so well. It's cute how you say there is no evidence, and yet his lips are coated. I love it!

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014

Lynette Marie, thank you so very much :-) Brooke

Comment from Patricia0129

Excellent

Way too cute Brooke!! This I assume is your handsome grandson. What a doll. So funny they do say " I didn't do it with icing on their face. What a fun poem that brings smiles. Xo

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014

Thanks so much, Patricia - yes, this is my one and only grandson :-) Brooke

Comment from L.A.Matthies

Excellent

How could you not take a million pictures of that face? Nope, he is definitely guilt free ...LOL! Wonderful, uplifting and beautifully rhymed, Brooke, thank you. :)Linda

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014

Thanks so much, Linda :-) Brooke

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

He's definitely been framed! How could a young lad who can speak in such beautifully flowing quatrains be anything but innocent? Clearly a case of poetic licence!

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014

LOL :-) Thanks so much, tfawcus. Brooke

Comment from ragamuffin

Excellent

A wonderful and warm piece. Love the photo. It goes perfectly with the poem. The poem is spot on when it comes to kids and missing sweets. A fun, smile bringing piece.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014

ragamuffin, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Such a look of innocence with his cupcake in his hands. This poem reminds me of my children when they were young, no one ever knew who ate the lollies, all were totally innocent. Good rhythm and rhyme, and flows really nicely.
valda

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014

valda, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Acquired Taste

Excellent

Hope you are putting all these into a picture book for Sawyer - ummm, perhaps you could show it off when he graduates high school???

My favorite - and I suspect the truest lines - but I am not responsible for where suspicion lands.

Love the rhyming in this and how could a picture of your Sawyer be anything but sweet?

AT=/

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014

AT, thank you so much. I appreciate your encouragement. I am definitely compiling these for Sawyer. Brooke

Comment from Enrique28

Exceptional

Maybe the poor lad is innocent after all...

The little one's likely story is superbly conveyed in this excellent and amusing little gem. Great stuff! Enrique

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014

Enrique, thank you so much :-) I appreciate your gracious and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke

Comment from Katzintx

Excellent

I wonder if you will show these pictures and poems to his future wife when he is grown. Thanks for a sweet way to enjoy a treat.katz

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014

Katz, thank you so much :-) He may not show them to her, but I bet his mother will. LOL :-) Brooke

Comment from Martin Chan

Exceptional

A nicely composed rhyming quatrains poetry written with a good thinking and nice choice of words for a good description. The picture complements the poem.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014

Martin, thank you so very much for your gracious and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke