They Claim a Cupcake's Missing
rhyming quatrains207 total reviews
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Brooke,
Uh oh, caught icing handed - or is that lipped? I bet that cupcake was calling his name, just begging to be eaten.
Nicely done, another great one for the collection.
Patrick
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Hi Brooke,
Uh oh, caught icing handed - or is that lipped? I bet that cupcake was calling his name, just begging to be eaten.
Nicely done, another great one for the collection.
Patrick
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Patrick, thank you, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Sarah Butterfly
Funny and amusing story in a poem you have written Brooke. Good rhyme used which makes it very fluent to read. Very nicely done!
Kind regards
Sarah
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Funny and amusing story in a poem you have written Brooke. Good rhyme used which makes it very fluent to read. Very nicely done!
Kind regards
Sarah
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Sarah, thank you so much for your generous sixth star and thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A delightful poem to accompany this cute pix. Cleverly written and great rhymes. A great poem to read 1st thing this morning. Have a blessed day, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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A delightful poem to accompany this cute pix. Cleverly written and great rhymes. A great poem to read 1st thing this morning. Have a blessed day, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Debbie,t hank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from James Chaima Phiri
How wonderful it is to watch children grow! They give lame excuses which are reasonable to their minds but irrelevant to adults. Based on the photo shown, can any judge believe that there is no evidence and accept the explanation in this poem. Well, I love the creative power of the author for portraying the mind of a child in an amazing way.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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How wonderful it is to watch children grow! They give lame excuses which are reasonable to their minds but irrelevant to adults. Based on the photo shown, can any judge believe that there is no evidence and accept the explanation in this poem. Well, I love the creative power of the author for portraying the mind of a child in an amazing way.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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James, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
Clever use of meter and rhyme to build your own cadence and enrich your story. Yeah, Don't admit to nothin' bub. You're always safe at first base. Kenny
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Clever use of meter and rhyme to build your own cadence and enrich your story. Yeah, Don't admit to nothin' bub. You're always safe at first base. Kenny
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Kenny, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Robin Gilmor
And such a innocent look. Go ahead, just try to prove I took it!
Adorable verse takes full advantage of the great
picture. Smiles,
Robin :)
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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And such a innocent look. Go ahead, just try to prove I took it!
Adorable verse takes full advantage of the great
picture. Smiles,
Robin :)
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Robin, thank you so much. Sawyer's Mommy was a champion liar, denying everything, so I look forward to his lying to her. LOL Brooke
Comment from Gungalo
I say the thief is clever,
he got away scot free.
The only thing I know for sure --
the culprit isn't me.
LOL he surely did.This is so cute Brooke and let's us know her is all boy. Who hasn't stolen a cupcake or two in their life. Great rhyming and wonderful flow to these quatrains.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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I say the thief is clever,
he got away scot free.
The only thing I know for sure --
the culprit isn't me.
LOL he surely did.This is so cute Brooke and let's us know her is all boy. Who hasn't stolen a cupcake or two in their life. Great rhyming and wonderful flow to these quatrains.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Gungalo, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
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Smiling to beat the band.
Comment from barleygirl
This is warm, funny, imaginative, & well-written. Your ability to keep coming up with creative ideas is unmatched on this website. I see you are #1 as a poet & a reviewer! Wow! That's remarkable & impressive! Especially becuz you do not write cryptic poetry full of analogies (which seems to be the favored sort here!) I love honest, palpable, straightforward poetry & you have that mastered nicely. Thanks for brightening everyone's day on this website! *smile*
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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This is warm, funny, imaginative, & well-written. Your ability to keep coming up with creative ideas is unmatched on this website. I see you are #1 as a poet & a reviewer! Wow! That's remarkable & impressive! Especially becuz you do not write cryptic poetry full of analogies (which seems to be the favored sort here!) I love honest, palpable, straightforward poetry & you have that mastered nicely. Thanks for brightening everyone's day on this website! *smile*
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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barleygirl, thank you so much :-) I prefer poetry people can understand too. Brooke
Comment from InterestingRon
Hi Brooke,
This delightful poem gave me happy childhood memories.
I used to collect Billy Bunter books. He was a fat schoolboy always stealing his classmates food. Sadly, he's not PC enough for modern kids so now banned!
He used to say things like. "I didn't steal your beastly jam-tarts! Anyway, you wouldn't have liked them. Not enough jam in them!"
Ron x
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Hi Brooke,
This delightful poem gave me happy childhood memories.
I used to collect Billy Bunter books. He was a fat schoolboy always stealing his classmates food. Sadly, he's not PC enough for modern kids so now banned!
He used to say things like. "I didn't steal your beastly jam-tarts! Anyway, you wouldn't have liked them. Not enough jam in them!"
Ron x
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Ron, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Bayberry
LOL What a delight, Brooke. He sure looks like a bit of a rascal in this adorable picture. These little guys can sure steal your heart. Have a wonderful day! -- Janet :)
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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LOL What a delight, Brooke. He sure looks like a bit of a rascal in this adorable picture. These little guys can sure steal your heart. Have a wonderful day! -- Janet :)
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Janet, thank you so much - his mom keeps telling me he has a naughty side though I am still in denial. LOL Brooke :-)
