They Claim a Cupcake's Missing
rhyming quatrains207 total reviews
Comment from Dom G Robles
The poem, as well as the picture, is excellent. The rhyme and rhyme, (taken together) is great. I have tried to count the beats (stresses) and I came to the conclusion that each paragraph is 7-6-8-6 with the exception of the second paragraph which (to me) is 8-6-8-6. I could be wrong. Any comment...? Dom
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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The poem, as well as the picture, is excellent. The rhyme and rhyme, (taken together) is great. I have tried to count the beats (stresses) and I came to the conclusion that each paragraph is 7-6-8-6 with the exception of the second paragraph which (to me) is 8-6-8-6. I could be wrong. Any comment...? Dom
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Dom, yes, I realize there is some variation in syllable count in this one. I just went with what sounded right and said the heck with the numbers. LOL Thanks so much for your generous review :-) Brooke
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You are very welcome Brooke. I appreciate your comments. Dom
Comment from krys123
I perfectly love this poem really shows that the picture works well for it. It's hard for me to write this because I'm still laughing. Okay I'm composed. The imagery of your poem really didn't need the picture that much but however with the picture it's fantastic. Your words are very creative, original and inspiring. Thank you for sharing and posting this for everyone for to make them laugh as much as I. May you and yours be blessed always....
Alex
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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I perfectly love this poem really shows that the picture works well for it. It's hard for me to write this because I'm still laughing. Okay I'm composed. The imagery of your poem really didn't need the picture that much but however with the picture it's fantastic. Your words are very creative, original and inspiring. Thank you for sharing and posting this for everyone for to make them laugh as much as I. May you and yours be blessed always....
Alex
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Alex, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are so sincerely welcome Brooke...
Comment from padumachitta
Hello. That is a child's lament...it wasn't me! And how often they don't see the evidence on their faces...bless the wee ones.
May you be well and the little one too!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Hello. That is a child's lament...it wasn't me! And how often they don't see the evidence on their faces...bless the wee ones.
May you be well and the little one too!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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padumachitta, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Connie C
I just love this poem, Brooke. Both the picture and the delightful poem let us know who the culprit really is even though he denies it. Another darling image of Sawyer.
My best to you.
Connie
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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I just love this poem, Brooke. Both the picture and the delightful poem let us know who the culprit really is even though he denies it. Another darling image of Sawyer.
My best to you.
Connie
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Connie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Well you can tell that Sawyer by the innocent look on your cup cake smeared face. LOL That is so cute. You thought up the right poem for this picture Brooke. Absolutely adorable picture. Nancy
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Well you can tell that Sawyer by the innocent look on your cup cake smeared face. LOL That is so cute. You thought up the right poem for this picture Brooke. Absolutely adorable picture. Nancy
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Nancy, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Domino 2
Just for his cute innocent expression, I'd have to vote Sawyer 'Not Guilty Your Honour'. :-)
He'd also make a great lawyer for the defence.
Very cute read, Brooke, with a sweet (excuse the pun) theme.
Best wishes, Ted
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Just for his cute innocent expression, I'd have to vote Sawyer 'Not Guilty Your Honour'. :-)
He'd also make a great lawyer for the defence.
Very cute read, Brooke, with a sweet (excuse the pun) theme.
Best wishes, Ted
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Thank you, Ted - of course, in my eyes, he'll never be guilty. My children were guilty of plenty, but not my little Sawyer. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from twinklepoems
I have to give it six stars because I too would be a cupcake thief! What a priceless look on Sawyer's face. This poem has such whimsy and clever wording. Somebody must have slipped the cake in my unwilling hands. Yes, I believe that, things often end up in my unwilling hands through no fault of my own! Often accused of things for which there is no evidence, check! Too, too, cute.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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I have to give it six stars because I too would be a cupcake thief! What a priceless look on Sawyer's face. This poem has such whimsy and clever wording. Somebody must have slipped the cake in my unwilling hands. Yes, I believe that, things often end up in my unwilling hands through no fault of my own! Often accused of things for which there is no evidence, check! Too, too, cute.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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twinkle, thank you so very much :-) I'm so glad you enjoyed and appreciate your generous sixth star. Brooke
Comment from jmdg1954
Sawyer, Sawyer, Sawyer... Your mommy probably tells you "wait till you have kids, I hope they're just like you!"
Of course she'll say that, she's your Mom! Great poem to go with a great photo, Brooke!
Nicely done... John
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Sawyer, Sawyer, Sawyer... Your mommy probably tells you "wait till you have kids, I hope they're just like you!"
Of course she'll say that, she's your Mom! Great poem to go with a great photo, Brooke!
Nicely done... John
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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John, thank you so very much :-) - Miranda was an inveterate, champion liar/denier, so now it's her turn to be on the receiving end LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is another beautiful poem from the author in this piece of writing. Sawyer doesn't look to be too bothered at all. He is unashamed. I wish I was as innocent as this again. I could go back to where it all went wrong. LOL.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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This is another beautiful poem from the author in this piece of writing. Sawyer doesn't look to be too bothered at all. He is unashamed. I wish I was as innocent as this again. I could go back to where it all went wrong. LOL.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Tomes, thank you so much. :-) I just made up the theft for the sake of the poem - the cupcake was given to him. LOL Brooke
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I thought as much
Comment from DonandVicki
Quite a cute tale about a missing cupcake. We have the same problem with cookies around here . Sweet write as always Brooke. DonandVicki.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Quite a cute tale about a missing cupcake. We have the same problem with cookies around here . Sweet write as always Brooke. DonandVicki.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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DonandVicki, thank you so much :-) Brooke
