Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

adewpearl,

This is a beautiful poem. I liked it very much. Nicely written work. Perfectly arranged. Very good formatting. Smooth flowing. Understandable.

There was no SPAG. No room for improvement.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

---

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014

Oatmeal, so good to see you - thank you for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke

reply by Oatmeal on 11-Feb-2014

Brooke,

You are very welcome.

Love you,

Camille

Comment from Izzieshakespeare

Excellent

I have to love a poem that makes me laugh! This poem is well-done, loved the rhyming sequences, and a cute subject on top of all that. You might say that this poem is like the icing on the cupcake.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

---

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014

Thank you so much, Izzie :-) Brooke

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

I believe that Sawyer is confused because somebody did slip that cupcake into his hands and of course he doesn't understand why anyone would want to stick the blame on him.
Lovely fun poem and a picture of stunned Sawyer to accompany it

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

---

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014

emrpoems, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from NightWriter

Exceptional

They Claim a Cupcake's Missing is another outstanding and fun-filled poem. Very creative and captivating. Perfect rhythm and rhyme throughout.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

---

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014

Steve, thank you so very much, my generous friend :-) Brooke

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

What an adorable face on the culprit. He makes a case for his innocence. Maybe he'll be a lawyer some day. LOL Denial to the very end. Clever little man.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

---

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014

Thanks so much, Spitfire - his Uncle Eric just graduated from law school, so I'm sure he'll offer him some coaching advice. LOL Brooke

Comment from FrannyG

Excellent

Another gorgeous poem, Brooke, and the photo is superb, Sawyer wearing his 'who me?' expression. I never cease to marvel at how many poems you write and every one is original in every way.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

---

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014

Thank you so much, Franny :-) Brooke

Comment from rhymelord

Excellent

Dear Brooke,
Well, you really enhanced the guilt clearly apparent on the "angel's" face. But, is he really guilty or merely the victim of some nefarious plot by that darn little girl from next door? There is another poem there!!!
Reg

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

---

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014

Reg, thank you so very much for your humor and your review :-) Brooke

Comment from chasennov

Excellent

'They Claim a Cupcake's Missing.'

Somebody must have slipped the cake
in my unwilling hands,
but I am not responsible
for where suspicion lands.

A very appropriate poem, Brooke. Author notes: (cuptake)

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

---

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014

Chasennov, thank you so much :-) Brooke

reply by chasennov on 10-Feb-2014

You are most welcome, Brooke.

Comment from janalma

Excellent

This isn't fair. That little boy is stealing my heart. He truly is a thief! Lol. Love the poem that describes him to a T. Perfect.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

---

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014

janalma, thank you so very much :-) Brooke

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This is a fun poem that comes with a terrific capture of a suspect with a smoking gun in hand. The look on his face is priceless.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

---

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014

Thank you so much, Bill :-) Brooke