They Claim a Cupcake's Missing
rhyming quatrains207 total reviews
Comment from GracieAnn
Brooke, LOL How fun this is. The look on his face says it all and the write is fitting. Temptation makes us do crazy things. Fun rhyme and meter. I enjoyed this. :0 GracieAnn
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Brooke, LOL How fun this is. The look on his face says it all and the write is fitting. Temptation makes us do crazy things. Fun rhyme and meter. I enjoyed this. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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GracieAnn, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Stephanie Kay
This light, humorous poem had me smiling from the very first word. And the adorable picture definitely does this poem justice! We've all been the ''me'' in this poem at one point or anything and can all relate :)
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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This light, humorous poem had me smiling from the very first word. And the adorable picture definitely does this poem justice! We've all been the ''me'' in this poem at one point or anything and can all relate :)
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Stephanie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Carole Rosa
Brooke, Sawyer's expression tells it all. "Caught in the act!" The poem is just absolutely perfect for this picture. The picture would win a photo contest. I hope I'm still alive by the time your book is complete and published, so I can buy it. I love it! Carole
P.S. The "cuptake" is a cute play on words.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Brooke, Sawyer's expression tells it all. "Caught in the act!" The poem is just absolutely perfect for this picture. The picture would win a photo contest. I hope I'm still alive by the time your book is complete and published, so I can buy it. I love it! Carole
P.S. The "cuptake" is a cute play on words.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Carole, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from fairy77
haha that was very amusing:)Liked the culprit.How do you come up with these. Friggin fantastic had a good chuckle. Look at that innocent face:)beth fairy77.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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haha that was very amusing:)Liked the culprit.How do you come up with these. Friggin fantastic had a good chuckle. Look at that innocent face:)beth fairy77.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Beth, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Petriesan
Of course he didn't do it, how could he?you capture life really well.
Today, my son in law posted on facebook a picture of the kiddo sitting on the door of the dishwasher with the proudest look on her face.
His comment was " I think I have lost control around here."
He has,but he needs to get her off that door.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Of course he didn't do it, how could he?you capture life really well.
Today, my son in law posted on facebook a picture of the kiddo sitting on the door of the dishwasher with the proudest look on her face.
His comment was " I think I have lost control around here."
He has,but he needs to get her off that door.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, Petriesan. Don't you just love Facebook and the way it keeps us in touch with our grandkids? :-) Brooke
Comment from CR Delport
What? The Cute Little one steal a cupcake? Never! The cupcake came willingly :) This is so cute! Thanks for sharing another great poem and a gem of a picture :)
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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What? The Cute Little one steal a cupcake? Never! The cupcake came willingly :) This is so cute! Thanks for sharing another great poem and a gem of a picture :)
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, CR - yes, he didn't steal it. That is just Grandma's making him into a little villain for the sake of a good poem. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Hi PearlyOne,
Such a pleasure to read this one! Wonderful to see you are still rolling out these lovely little grandchild-inspired poems. I loved it. You manage so well to capture these cute and precious moments. The expression on the little fellow's face is priceless... and so is your poem.
Hugs, Aggie (W ^-^)
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Hi PearlyOne,
Such a pleasure to read this one! Wonderful to see you are still rolling out these lovely little grandchild-inspired poems. I loved it. You manage so well to capture these cute and precious moments. The expression on the little fellow's face is priceless... and so is your poem.
Hugs, Aggie (W ^-^)
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Aggie, thank you so much for your generous sixth star and thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Emily George
I loved this cheeky and impish rhyme.It Just got into the nature of not me, that a child relates to no one saw me the cake is gone.I loved the to and throe of its lines
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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I loved this cheeky and impish rhyme.It Just got into the nature of not me, that a child relates to no one saw me the cake is gone.I loved the to and throe of its lines
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Emily, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from J. P. Egry
What can I say? ABSOLUTELY adorable! This poem is perfect in every way with the humor at the top of the list. I don't know if magazines for parents publish poetry anymore, but it would be worth it to find out. It would be perfect for that venue. And what a great title---sure made me want to read the poem. The words "they claim" does it!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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What can I say? ABSOLUTELY adorable! This poem is perfect in every way with the humor at the top of the list. I don't know if magazines for parents publish poetry anymore, but it would be worth it to find out. It would be perfect for that venue. And what a great title---sure made me want to read the poem. The words "they claim" does it!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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thank you so much, J.P., for your encouragement and your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from ravenblack
Oh, this so reminds me of my kids. Once found and ate half of one of their birthday cakes, trying to pin the blame on the other though both their faces were smeared with chocolate. Consolation- at least they will never be master thieves.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Oh, this so reminds me of my kids. Once found and ate half of one of their birthday cakes, trying to pin the blame on the other though both their faces were smeared with chocolate. Consolation- at least they will never be master thieves.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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ravenblack, thank you so much for sharing that delightful memory and for your review :-) Brooke
