Comment from The Death

Excellent

Loved the humor your words convey here. Your well chosen words always create the desired impact.
The rhythm, rhyme and meter are spot on as always.
Each Rogue write is refreshing and fun.
I enjoyed reading this.
Have a great day! :)

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014

Thank you very much, my friend. As always, I appreciate it.

Comment from rhymelord

Excellent

Love it. Absolutely love it. Perfect rhythm, strong internal rhymes, the lot. And the subject matter, with is dealt with so "delicately" would have Noel Coward weeping in envy.
Reg

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014

Thanks so much, Reg. Although tempted to go "base", I actually find it more fun to say it more delicately. I appreciate the compliments!

David

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I really think it's fun that you have this alter ego, no pun intended, that comes out every Friday. Nice imagery and rhythm. The subject matter is a bit tawdry, but goes with the emotion and the character of the writer.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014

Thanks very much, GWHARGIS. I figured we'd better limit it to keep it fresh, but it seems to inspire several muses, so that's a good thing, right? I appreciate the review.

Comment from Pili Pubul

Excellent

Your poetry is always fantastic no matter the subject, and this one is not
exception. Great style and hilarious sarcasm
, Don Juan style LOL. Love the images. Pili

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014

Thanks so much, my friend. I hope you're having a great day!

reply by Pili Pubul on 09-Feb-2014

You are very welcome. Smiles. Pili

Comment from chasennov

Excellent

'Lights Out by.'

You see, I vet the setting of our bedding with a glance,
So when we?re heavy petting, cue the music of the dance;
But as the song?s abating, I?ll desert you where you are,
And as the night is fading, I?ll be on a brighter star,
Excellent stuff.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014

Thank you very much, chase.

reply by chasennov on 09-Feb-2014

You are most welcome.

Comment from comanalbert

Excellent

Are you good or what? You're better than great! Made them happy and sad at the same time...Yet, there should be an answer to this,isn't it? Where should I find it?

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014

There are several, actually, but they came before this one. Closetpoetjester, Emmex, Paula60, Ideasaregems~Dawn, Acquired Taste, etc. Thank you, my friend.

reply by comanalbert on 09-Feb-2014

I'll look into them!(into, hahaha!)
I've posted the last part of my war writing and I expect to get angry reviews about men's only obsession with women...

Comment from Julia.

Excellent

Hay? Ouch! Have you ever mucked stables or bucked hay bales? They're prickly as all get out. And cable cars? Every one I've ever been on was packed (granted I've only been on them during the middle of the day and never during odd hours), so you'd be risking obscenity charges. Although San Francisco is pretty liberal in what they, er, tolerate. :)

(Sorry, had to poke a little fun! I know The Rogue can take it. The poem really was quite well done and rather delightfully raunchy)

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014

Actually, my labor was more curing tobacco and working in the fields, but let's say that the setting for these trysts would absolutely be as fantastical as the character himself. Thank you very much, my friend, and feel free to poke away. HE does, after all. ;-)

Comment from mountainwriter49

Excellent

HI, David,

You should really collect these Rogue poems and get them in print. They are marvelous with humor, poetic flare and superb use of language. A most enjoyable read this late evening.

Ray

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014

Thanks so much, Ray. I think I'll do just that when all is said and done. They're certainly fun to do, and a good break from the deeper stuff. So glad you like them.

reply by mountainwriter49 on 08-Feb-2014

Yessir, they are. You've created a certain esprit d'corps with this series that significantly livened up the site. I think many have enjoyed the banter.
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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014

Thank you, Ray. Many have, some I think have hated it, but those who don't like it can certainly stay away if they like. I appreciate your kind words.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

You should team up with Hitcher. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Excellent job.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014

Hitcher? Thanks very much, c_lucas. I appreciate the great review.

reply by c_lucas on 08-Feb-2014

A fellow Fanststorian. You're welcome, Marillion. Charlie

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Dear Rogue,

I'm encouraged to see you trying to take a stab at the comely ladies or is that the buxom hens, of FS incorporated. I however am even more encouraged than you are, about the arrival of other hens to carry the torch of waging war against the tireless cavalier Rogue. All in good fun dear man and that it has been.

You almost got a little sting in here:
I'll desert you where you are,
And as the night is fading, I'll be on a brighter star,

Nice job my friend,

Gloria

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014

Thank you, my dear Gloria. The hens are well stocked AND well cocked, so it's a win/win for all. You know I love you, right? ;-)

D

reply by Gloria .... on 08-Feb-2014

What kind of silly question is that? Of course I know. I love you too, baby. ;-)

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014

:-)