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A Stolen Kiss

triolet

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Comment from Auroraboreal800
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This is the most lovely, sweet and cute poem. Love the picture, but I'm not so sure Sawyer is convinced that a stolen kiss is not a crime.
Nicely done poem!
:)




 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    Aurora, thank you so very much :-) He actually has a crush on this little girl - he calls her dozens of times on his play phone when she's not around. LOL :-) Brooke
reply by Auroraboreal800 on 08-Feb-2014
    WOW!! THIS IS SO COOL AND CUTE!! :))
Comment from NightWriter
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Bravo! A Stolen Kiss reads like a song,so beautifully written. Another perfect triolet poem here worthy of any Hallmark card. Bravo!


 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    Steve, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Belinda
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Hi Brooke... My favorite poet: Adewpearl. My favorite poem: triolet: My favorite model: Sawyer. You gave them all today. Right, a stolen kiss is not a crime... :)

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    Thank you so very much, my gracious friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Deniz22
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So cute! He's a lady killer already and the really charming thing is, he has no clue. Very sweet as always and I love
"A stolen kiss is not a crime
if love is in the poacher's heart."

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    Dennis, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from amahra
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I'm jealous, I wanted sawyer for my granddaughter. LOL Really, though, it was a real treat to read your latest on his endless adventures.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    My guess is a lot of grannies will be fighting for rights to him over the years. LOL Thanks so very much, amahra :-) Brooke
Comment from N.K. Wagner
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Already he's a lady killer, Brooke! Your photo encourages your poem to be read in all innocence, but it also conveys a more adult declaration. Excellent triolet. :) Nancy

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    Nancy, yep, he is one precocious little lover. LOL Thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Taffspride
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A good entry for the contest Brooke. It is so charming and pairs well with this delightful picture of Sawyer, what breaker if hearts he will be in a few years

I like the way this triolet sounds when read aloud. It trips off the tongue so easily. Just like that stolen kiss.

Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

Iechyd da

Ann

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    Ann, so good to hear from you :-) Thanks so much. Brooke
reply by Taffspride on 07-Feb-2014
    :) nice to be back Brooke
Comment from Kingsrookviii
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I love this picture. Mr. Sawyer looks so interested ... in something, but not the little girl. However, she know what she likes. LOL. Great photo for when he is older to bribe him with.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    Thanks so much, Kingsrook. The funny thing is that when Chloe is not around, Sawyer calls her on his play phone a couple dozen times a day. LOL Brooke
reply by Kingsrookviii on 07-Feb-2014
    Well, us single guys do miss feline (I mean female) attention when we are not center of attention. LOL
Comment from Lulube
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and a SOMO

What a cutie pie she is. Just a wonderful poem for such an innocent picture. Sawyer doesn't seem to mind at all. lol

A stolen kiss is not a crime This line steals the whole poem. It is poetic in itself.

Great work Brooke

lulube

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    Thanks so much, lulube - Sawyer has been quite smitten with Chloe for several months now :-) Brooke
reply by Lulube on 07-Feb-2014
    No doubt, there's no sourpuss look on his face. lol

    lulube
Comment from Jumbo J
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Hi Brooke,
I can see why this might be his favorite play date... but like most males, he does have that bemused expression on his face.

Loved the refrain of this form of poetry, actually had me thinking... is a stolen kiss a crime if it was intended with love? mmmm this ones going to stick in my mind, I dislike those riddles that linger... a stolen kiss... crime, if Love's involved? Ah, I don't know, maybe... maybe not?

Wonderfully crafted triolet.
All the best in this contest.

With our thoughts we create,
a loop hole in the law,
James xx

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    Thanks so much, James - he is obsessed with this sweetie - he calls her on his play phone a couple dozen times a day. LOL Brooke :-)
reply by Jumbo J on 07-Feb-2014
    How cute... love it. xx