Comment from Sanku

Excellent

This photograph would meld even a rock hard heart .And coupled with the endearing triolet, it is a sheer pleasure to read .it causes a wistful smile that lingers long after reading it.Sawyer is a bit unsure about the kiss.I wish the word is not 'poacher'!

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014

Thanks so much, Sanku :-) Brooke

Comment from janalma

Excellent

I love the poem. Stolen kisses are special, especially if there is true love there. Lol. And it looks like there is. The pic is adorable. Sawyer is looking up like he's saying, "Are you sure this is ok, Mom?" The little girl is beautiful too.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014

Thanks so much, janalma. Yes, Chloe is as much a charmer as Sawyer is :-) Brooke

Comment from JMRoland

Exceptional

Aw Brooke-
This one is simply adorable. Sweet, clever rhyme and precious photo- who could resist such a darling, poetic, impromptu valentine kiss?

JMR

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014

JMR, thank you so much. I very much appreciate your thoughtful comments and generous rating. Brooke

reply by JMRoland on 09-Feb-2014

You are welcome. Photographer caught a precious moment. Resulting poem perfect.

JMR

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

This is so cute and so funny! And you have the perfect picture to match it. Yes, I think I can remember stealing a kiss or two. The innocence of young love ... sigh!

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014

CG, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from handmadecards

Excellent

A delightful, and quite layered I think, piece of writing. Is it unrequited love, illicit love, a schoolyard crush ..... many reasons that may motivate this smitten kiss poacher . Delightful read, thank you.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014

thank you for your positive comments, handmadecards - in light of the positive comments, can I ask why the 4 rating? Brooke

reply by handmadecards on 07-Feb-2014

oops, I am soooo sorry, that was a mistake. I will edit your review at once.

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014

thanks so much :-)

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

So cute Brook I must say Sawyer is in awe of what is going on with his play pal kissing him
Great contest entry.

Gert

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014

Gert, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke

Comment from babylonia

Excellent

Brooke,
ROFLMAO Makes me smiggle and giggle and ...
Oh, for the days when I was a little girl and having kisses stolen from me. :D
Love,
Barbara

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014

Barbara, I"m so glad you enjoyed this and have fun memories :-) Thanks for your review. Brooke

reply by babylonia on 07-Feb-2014

Brooke,
I definitely do.
Love,
Barbara

Comment from Emeka13

Excellent

Poor thing. Sawyer looks so unsure if not scared of the strange thing happening to him. A kiss is being stolen in his presence and he is lost for words. A beautiful presentation of the first experience they both would like to forget in the next few years. Well done. Emeka

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014

Emeka, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from brittanydawngray

Excellent

Such a precious and innocent photo which goes perfectly with your lovely poem. "A stolen kiss is not a crime" ... I really like that. I wish you all the best.


Brittany Dawn Gray

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014

Brittany, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from LorraineK

Excellent

An adorable illustration with an equally adorable poem. Kissing is not a crime, in fact it is divine! Great poem. Enjoyed reading it. It made me laugh. LorraineK

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014

Lorraine, thank you so much :-) Brooke