A Stolen Kiss
triolet197 total reviews
Comment from L.A.Matthies
That is really lovely ...the look on Sawyer's face is priceless LOL!
I don't think I've ever read a Triolet before ...thank you for the introduction :)Linda
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That is really lovely ...the look on Sawyer's face is priceless LOL!
I don't think I've ever read a Triolet before ...thank you for the introduction :)Linda
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, Linda :-) Brooke
Comment from Dustman6180
What a perfect line: "A stolen kiss is not a crime
if love is in the poacher's heart." I love it. The look on Sawyer's face is priceless.
Dusty
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What a perfect line: "A stolen kiss is not a crime
if love is in the poacher's heart." I love it. The look on Sawyer's face is priceless.
Dusty
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Dusty, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from The Death
Lovely and beautifully written.
No bell will ring without its chime,
I love this one.
Your refrains are well chosen and apt to intensify the sweetness of love. :)
A very light and refreshing poem.
I enjoyed reading it. :)
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Lovely and beautifully written.
No bell will ring without its chime,
I love this one.
Your refrains are well chosen and apt to intensify the sweetness of love. :)
A very light and refreshing poem.
I enjoyed reading it. :)
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Anupam, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from James Sarzotti
Wow, what a cute pic. I sees he's maturing. These poems with accompanying photos, all keying off him, are quite a precious document.
A stolen kiss is not a crime << I hear the 'chime' already, sonically.
if love is in the poacher's heart. << Well, there's some irony.
No bell will ring without its chime, << A lot could be said about love concerning this.
a stolen kiss is not a crime,
and I'll not rest until you're mine,
for life falls short when we're apart. << Such wonderful innocence! Yes, everyone has someone and it's true across the board.
A stolen kiss is not a crime
if love is in the poacher's heart. << A defanging of greed, I suppose. Or so much more. A ringing couplet, indeed.
Well Brooke, I know it's late, or early, depending on the continent. But I just fell in love with this one.
I've missed you on my travels. Lots of adventures. Almost surprised I made it home. But here I am, back enjoying your wonderful poems again.
BTW, I think you'll ace this contest.
And thanks for sharing such artful innocence.
James
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Wow, what a cute pic. I sees he's maturing. These poems with accompanying photos, all keying off him, are quite a precious document.
A stolen kiss is not a crime << I hear the 'chime' already, sonically.
if love is in the poacher's heart. << Well, there's some irony.
No bell will ring without its chime, << A lot could be said about love concerning this.
a stolen kiss is not a crime,
and I'll not rest until you're mine,
for life falls short when we're apart. << Such wonderful innocence! Yes, everyone has someone and it's true across the board.
A stolen kiss is not a crime
if love is in the poacher's heart. << A defanging of greed, I suppose. Or so much more. A ringing couplet, indeed.
Well Brooke, I know it's late, or early, depending on the continent. But I just fell in love with this one.
I've missed you on my travels. Lots of adventures. Almost surprised I made it home. But here I am, back enjoying your wonderful poems again.
BTW, I think you'll ace this contest.
And thanks for sharing such artful innocence.
James
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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James, thank you so very much for your generous sixth star :-) Adventures, ah, I am green with envy :-) Brooke
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Yes, it's savage as hell out there. I'm still green around the gills :)
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'A Stolen Kiss' is a delightfully written piece. This poacher of hearts may have a great deal to answer for years later! It was a pleasure to review this talented poet's work.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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'A Stolen Kiss' is a delightfully written piece. This poacher of hearts may have a great deal to answer for years later! It was a pleasure to review this talented poet's work.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Duchess, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Brooke, as always you're more than welcome
:-) the Duchess
Comment from Jessica Bell
After reading this brief poem, I'm left thinking about this line:
" If love is in the poacher's heart."
How simple and beautiful this line is!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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After reading this brief poem, I'm left thinking about this line:
" If love is in the poacher's heart."
How simple and beautiful this line is!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Jessica, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Gladness
Looks like Sawyer is Chloe's favorite too: *) Very cute picture and a delightful poem to match. Something tells me this is just the beginning of stolen kisses for Sawyer.
Anita
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Looks like Sawyer is Chloe's favorite too: *) Very cute picture and a delightful poem to match. Something tells me this is just the beginning of stolen kisses for Sawyer.
Anita
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, Anita - Chloe is a real sweetheart. When she is not around, Sawyer calls her on his play phone. It's the cutest thing ever :-) Brooke
Comment from KathyH
I love the message in this piece. That intent and motivation make the difference when we judge behavior. I especially love the picture you chose to go with this piece, perfect combo. Kathy
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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I love the message in this piece. That intent and motivation make the difference when we judge behavior. I especially love the picture you chose to go with this piece, perfect combo. Kathy
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Kathy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from IndianaIrish
You sure were right about this photo, Brooke! I adore the look on Sawyer's face. Your triolet describing a stolen kiss given with love. Best wishes in the contest.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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You sure were right about this photo, Brooke! I adore the look on Sawyer's face. Your triolet describing a stolen kiss given with love. Best wishes in the contest.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Karyn, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Bayberry
Such a cute triolet for the Valentine season. It's already easy to tell Sawyer is going to be very popular with the young ladies. :-)
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Such a cute triolet for the Valentine season. It's already easy to tell Sawyer is going to be very popular with the young ladies. :-)
Comment Written 07-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Thanks so very much, Bayberry :-) Brooke
