A Stolen Kiss
triolet197 total reviews
Comment from RGstar
A good capture of a moment frozen it time. Good repeating lines and a good depiction of your image.
A bright layout and good imagery depicted in this.
Good write
RGstar
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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A good capture of a moment frozen it time. Good repeating lines and a good depiction of your image.
A bright layout and good imagery depicted in this.
Good write
RGstar
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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RG, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from allinmyhead
Nice use of the word poacher in combination with 'stolen'. We all have these words running around in our heads but only you seem to be able to pull out just the right ones to light up your work.
Sweet poem. Darling photo. Gentle, easy to read rhyme gives this a pleasant flow.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Nice use of the word poacher in combination with 'stolen'. We all have these words running around in our heads but only you seem to be able to pull out just the right ones to light up your work.
Sweet poem. Darling photo. Gentle, easy to read rhyme gives this a pleasant flow.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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thank you so much, allinmyhead, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from fairy77
Aww how adorable. Loved not rest until you're mine:)The pic is precious and he's making friends:)I love stolen kiss he looks smitten LOL!beth hugs.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Aww how adorable. Loved not rest until you're mine:)The pic is precious and he's making friends:)I love stolen kiss he looks smitten LOL!beth hugs.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Beth, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from mountainwriter49
Good Evening, Brooke
On this you can bet
this wonderful triolet
is one of your best yet!
This is a perfect poem with perfect meter and flow and the theme is just perfect for this Valentine's season. I had to smile with the image appended to the poem.
Well done, my friend, and good luck to you in the contest.
Ray
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
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Good Evening, Brooke
On this you can bet
this wonderful triolet
is one of your best yet!
This is a perfect poem with perfect meter and flow and the theme is just perfect for this Valentine's season. I had to smile with the image appended to the poem.
Well done, my friend, and good luck to you in the contest.
Ray
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
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Ray, thank you so very much. I am digging myself out from buried reviews and nearly choked when I saw I never acknowledged your generous six star rating. So, please accept this as a thank you and an apology :-) Brooke
Comment from Cumbrianlass
A stolen kiss is not a crime
if love is in the poacher's heart.
What a lovely sentiment, Brooke! So appropriate for Valentine's Day.
No bell will ring without its chime - that too, it a sweet way of describing two people in love.
Yep - that little lad will be a heart-breaker one day!
Cute pic!
Av
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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A stolen kiss is not a crime
if love is in the poacher's heart.
What a lovely sentiment, Brooke! So appropriate for Valentine's Day.
No bell will ring without its chime - that too, it a sweet way of describing two people in love.
Yep - that little lad will be a heart-breaker one day!
Cute pic!
Av
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Av, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from shortwerks
Reviewing your work is almost like cheating. It is always so good and it's always delightful.
Loved your repeating lines "A stolen kiss is not a crime/if love is in the poacher's heart."
Lovely and exacting example of the form. You make me want to try one.
Thanks again for sharing your work with all of us.
Peace.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Reviewing your work is almost like cheating. It is always so good and it's always delightful.
Loved your repeating lines "A stolen kiss is not a crime/if love is in the poacher's heart."
Lovely and exacting example of the form. You make me want to try one.
Thanks again for sharing your work with all of us.
Peace.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much, shortwerks :-) I do hope you try a triolet :-) Brooke
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
How very, very sweet this is. The picture says it all, And no doubt provided the inspiration for the triolet. I enjoyed it very much, especially the natural innocence. Giddy
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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How very, very sweet this is. The picture says it all, And no doubt provided the inspiration for the triolet. I enjoyed it very much, especially the natural innocence. Giddy
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Giddy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from catch22
Hi Brooke, this triolet's adorable. I really like the choice of repeating line and the crime of poaching love is very clever. As always, this reads and sounds wonderful aloud. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Hi Brooke, this triolet's adorable. I really like the choice of repeating line and the crime of poaching love is very clever. As always, this reads and sounds wonderful aloud. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Gail, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You're welcome.
Comment from Dave Russell
Such a sweet poem to match the perfect picture. I love the way you use the concept of "poaching" to describe the one stealing the kiss...very cleaver
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Such a sweet poem to match the perfect picture. I love the way you use the concept of "poaching" to describe the one stealing the kiss...very cleaver
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Dave, it's so good to hear from you. Thank you so much for your generous sixth star and thoughtful comments :-) Brooke
Comment from Mastery
How sweet this is, Brooke. Absolutely priceless. I t does my heart good. I am not up to par at all, but am trying to do something to offset the pain blues. This poem helped immensely. Bob
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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How sweet this is, Brooke. Absolutely priceless. I t does my heart good. I am not up to par at all, but am trying to do something to offset the pain blues. This poem helped immensely. Bob
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Bob, it's so good to hear from you, and I do hope you are feeling up to snuff soon. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and for your generous rating :-) Brooke
