A Stolen Kiss
triolet197 total reviews
Comment from TAB_that's me
This lovely triolet poem is written in perfect form with the perfect meter. Your choice of repeating lines makes it flow well.
~Teresa~
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014
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This lovely triolet poem is written in perfect form with the perfect meter. Your choice of repeating lines makes it flow well.
~Teresa~
Comment Written 06-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, Teresa :-) Brooke
Comment from Adri7enne
Poor little darling. The girls are already hitting on him. He's so cute. LOL! What a cute picture.
Yes, I agree. Not a crime at all to share a stolen kiss. As a matter of fact, I wouldn't fight too hard if someone had a mind to steal one from me. LOL! So cute, Brooke. Made me grin.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014
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Poor little darling. The girls are already hitting on him. He's so cute. LOL! What a cute picture.
Yes, I agree. Not a crime at all to share a stolen kiss. As a matter of fact, I wouldn't fight too hard if someone had a mind to steal one from me. LOL! So cute, Brooke. Made me grin.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much, Adrienne - in every picture where they're together it looks like Chloe is pursuing him, but when she's not there, he talks about her all the time. I've heard him make dozens of pretend phone calls to her. LOL Brooke
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Sounds like a first crush. Too sweet! LOL!
Comment from nancyjam
How sweet is this? Darling picture and
a perfect accompaniment to your lovely
Triolet about a stolen kiss, which in this
case is definitely not a crime.
Love is in the air!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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How sweet is this? Darling picture and
a perfect accompaniment to your lovely
Triolet about a stolen kiss, which in this
case is definitely not a crime.
Love is in the air!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Nancy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from paulah60
A lovely piece of writing Brooke; as always, not just frivolous, but with a message. A stolen kiss or anything (that may or may not be wanted) that involves the heart is never a crime, even if it might not seem so at the time.
cheers
Paula
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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A lovely piece of writing Brooke; as always, not just frivolous, but with a message. A stolen kiss or anything (that may or may not be wanted) that involves the heart is never a crime, even if it might not seem so at the time.
cheers
Paula
Comment Written 06-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Paula, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
This is very sweet - the picture is a treat - can't imagine what Sawyer is thinking! Such sweet words and there is very little else I can say. A perfect little triolet. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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This is very sweet - the picture is a treat - can't imagine what Sawyer is thinking! Such sweet words and there is very little else I can say. A perfect little triolet. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 06-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Dorothy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Joy Graham
That is such a cute picture. Young love is adorable :) you beat me to writing a triolet lol! I like the use of enjambment for lines one and two. They repeat well at the end. Line one repeats well by itself in the middle of the poem also. Good iambic tetrameter. Best wishes in the contest. It's a long way off but you should dominate the competition with this one :)
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014
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That is such a cute picture. Young love is adorable :) you beat me to writing a triolet lol! I like the use of enjambment for lines one and two. They repeat well at the end. Line one repeats well by itself in the middle of the poem also. Good iambic tetrameter. Best wishes in the contest. It's a long way off but you should dominate the competition with this one :)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014
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Whenever they're physically together, she looks like the pursuer, but when they're apart, he talks about her a LOT and makes many pretend phone calls to her. LOL Thanks so much, Joy :-) Brooke
Comment from Kingsland
Poacher... That's a harsh word for someone that is just seeking a little bit of affection. This was a well written poetic voice.it Has a lot of cuteness written into its thoughts. I enjoyed reading and responding to it... John
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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Poacher... That's a harsh word for someone that is just seeking a little bit of affection. This was a well written poetic voice.it Has a lot of cuteness written into its thoughts. I enjoyed reading and responding to it... John
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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John, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
