Comment from skye

Excellent

Poacher, stolen.. words that evoke larceny. I love your use of them in this innocent poem of stealing a kiss, coupled with the beautiful photo.
Excellent.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014

Skye, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Darkhorse555

Excellent

ah little angels beautiful picture these words rang beautifully No bell will ring without its chime, a stolen kiss is not a crime excellently draw piece dear friend

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014

Darkhorse, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

I can't identify if Sawyer's face is saying, "oh no, what's going on here," or is it, "that's right, uh-huh, I'm the man!"

Either way is a previous photo shot. Your poem did the photo justice, "a stolen kiss is not a crime. And I'll not rest until your mine."

Nicely done... John

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014

Thanks so much, John. He goes all shy when she makes her moves, but when she is not there, he makes pretend phone calls to her incessantly. LOL Brooke

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This is so well done. I love the picture and the rhythm your words express. The repetition gives it extra meaning. Sawyer looks surprised. He's already a chick magnet, I see. Ha Ha

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014

RYME4U, thank you so much :-) Yep, the girls are no dummies. Brooke

Comment from Janet Foor

Exceptional

Delightful triolet Brooke. What a sweet picture of Sawyer and Chloe. I will be a treasures memento one day - at least for Chloe. I love the repeating lines. I learn so much from just reading your work.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014

Janet, thank you so very much for your gracious and generous response to this triolet :-) Brooke

Comment from boxergirl

Excellent

Excellent Triolet styled poem. You said Chloe was after Sawyer and it looks like she is staking her claim. Cute!
"No bell will ring without its chime and stealing a kiss is not a crime" are my favorite lines. 8-)

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014

boxergirl, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This is a beautiful piece of writing from the author in this post. A stolen kiss is certainly not a crime if the poacher is a sweet little girl. This is absolutely lovely

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014

Tomes, thank you so much :-) Brooke

reply by Tomes Johnston on 08-Feb-2014

My pleasure

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Adorable picture and poem, Brooke. Well penned triolet--charming and delightful as an innocent kiss on the cheek of a playmate.

LOVE this line:

No bell will ring without its chime,


Fine flow and rhyming as usual. Nice phonetics, especially the consonance of L.

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014

rama devi, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Brooke - Oh I remember my kids when they were in JK - they gave a few kisses too:)
This is skillfully penned and with an endearing quality that I loved.
Great pic of Cutie Pie - this as a whole is a treasure.

Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Maureen

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014

Maureen, thank you so much :-) What is JK? Brooke

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A wonderful love poem with equally worthy artwork! I admire your work immensely and quality of this one is no exception! I like abaaabab rhyme scheme, it's creative and clever. Rhythm is tight! Well done. Roy.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014

Roy, thank you so much :-) Brooke