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A Stolen Kiss

triolet

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Comment from Pili Pubul
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Sawyer's expression tells more than a thousand words lol.
You created the perfect poem for that expression , just wonderful.
Love the style and delicious message. Pili

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    Pili, thank you so much :-) Brooke
reply by Pili Pubul on 07-Feb-2014
    You are very welcome... Pili
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
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Chloe is 'almost' as cute as Sawyer. First kiss. True love. But a stolen kiss is not a crime, if love is in the poacher's heart. Great little poem. :-) Carolyn

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    Carolyn, thank you so much :-) She is a little love. :-) Brooke
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Oh, my! She's got her bonnet set for Sawyer... Miranda better keep an eye on THAT one. LOL! So cuuuute.... and the poem is right on target. :)

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    Phyllis, thank you :-) Whenever she is not around Sawyer he is calling her up on his play phone. "Hello, Chloe. How are you, Chloe?" LOL Brooke
Comment from min_flowetry
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I loved it even though it was short I still think it was a good read excellently penned 'a stolen kiss is not a crime' I like that

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    Thank you, min flowetry. It's short because that is how long the triolet is :-) Brooke
reply by min_flowetry on 08-Feb-2014
    If you don't mind me askin what's a triolet
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
    It's an 8 line poem where the first, fourth and seventh lines are the same and the second and eighth lines are the same. The rhyme scheme is ABaAabAB. If you click on the blue link for the contest rules, they explain it.
Comment from mrsmajor
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Dear Brooke,

This is just too cute, that handsome little fellow is about to make that little girl his first love...The triolet form (which you write so well)is perfect for this poem, and of course a stolen kiss is certainly not a crime!

This is so sweet, I know Sawyer is going to love these poems when he's really old enough to read them...
Thanks for allowing us to be a part of his life, through your words...the picture is just adorable...Good luck in the contest!
Big Hugs,
Victoria

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    Victoria, thank you so much for your graciousness, my friend :-) Brooke
reply by mrsmajor on 07-Feb-2014

    You're very welcome, I love that little fellow, he's going to be one special guy, and so much love will always surround him!
Comment from kiwijenny
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So sweet and innocent and precious. What if this was flashed on the screen on Sawyer's wedding day...? I love it and a stolen kiss is not a crime...is so true....well done because it made me smile. I love your poems for their ability to lift a mood
God bless:o)

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
    kiwijenny, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from nomi338
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Uh oh Sawyer. Something tells me that the young man's heart is about to become the exclusive property of a certain young woman who has her eyes set on him. This is such a cute picture, it makes me smile deep within my heart. Great job. Oh and by the way, it is a graet poem as well.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    Thanks so much, nomi - Sawyer is already hooked - he calls Chloe on his play phone dozens of times. I just love the way he says her name. LOL Brooke :-)
Comment from Janie King
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Now how much more precious could that get? It just couldn't.He looks like he's looking up getting ready to ask if it's okay for her to kiss him. I love the poem. I've always liked this style. Great job. God loves you and so do I.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014
    Thank you so very much, Janie :-) Brooke
Comment from MelissaBickel
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I can't but have a lite heart when reading such a tender poem as this is. The expression on Sawyer's face is so cute. I truly love the sweetness of a triolet.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014
    Melissa, thank you so very much :-) I so appreciate your generous response to this poem. Brooke
Comment from Bina1
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It seems like he is saying......."this wasn't part of the deal!"...........how very cute. He seems to have captured her heart!

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014
    Bina, thanks so much :-) They both crush on each other, but she is more physical about it. LOL :-) Brooke
reply by Bina1 on 06-Feb-2014
    one of my grandsons, has had the same "girl friend" since they were 4 in preschool....he will be 15 this week!
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014
    that is very unusual for this day and age - it sure would make a great story to tell to their grandchildren one day :-)
reply by Bina1 on 06-Feb-2014
    they have yet to go "on a date"........as they said back in the day! It is just group gatherings.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014
    that's good - too many kids push things too fast nowadays - nobody needs pregnant middle schoolers!