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A Stolen Kiss

triolet

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Comment from American Patriot
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02/07/2014 Hello! I'm content with this poem because there happens to be rhyme, rhythm, beat, and flow. Please, watch for capitalization though. I think this poem is very truthful indeed! Congratulations on your feeling-based poem! - Respectively, Jason Robert Van Pelt

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 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    Jason, thank you for taking the time to review. I'm confused about your capitalization comment as I've capitalized exactly which lines I wanted to, the ones that begin new sentences. What did you want me to do instead? Brooke
reply by American Patriot on 07-Feb-2014
    02/07/2014 Hello! Poetry is an unique subject of its' own. Poetry doesn't need to follow the rules of the Standardized English Language. There are however, Universal Principles of Poetry. The capitalization principle is regarding the beginning of each individual line. Even though poetic lines might be within the same sentence they could be capitalized still, thus flowing even more so! - Respectively, Jason Robert Van Pelt
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    I respectfully disagree, but thank you for explaining :-)
reply by American Patriot on 07-Feb-2014
    02/07/2014 Hello! You're quite welcome. I have written just a few poems with individual poetic lines that are not capitalized at the beginning of each interval. - Respectively, Jason Robert Van Pelt
Comment from fastdigits
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Well, what else can one say,
except, Bravo, as you have
done it again, touched the
heart, first with your captivating
photo of innocence of a kiss
upon the lips, and then the
poetic and graceful manner of
your heart warming Triolet, sure
to be a winner

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    fastdigits, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from billscott
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And I am out of 6 stars here..darn.

I loved this poem, like so many others.

I think you have another fan on your hands!

Beautiful, funny, enjoyable poem!

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    Bill, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
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Very nice triolet, Brooke. Great choice of repeating line and as always just wonderful flow to your work. Also just love the picture but who would not just love that!!

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    JoLynn, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from TOMORAL
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Oh, my goodness, look at that stolen kiss! The look on Sawyer's face is priceless. What IS she doing? Lovely poem, just made my day, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    Tomoral, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from robina1978
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Lovely and cute photo that inspired you to write this faultless Triolet. I liked the repeating line best: a stolen kiss id not a crime.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    Ine, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from InterestingRon
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Hi Brooke,
A touching poem about a stolen kiss.
I wonder - do Eskimos write poetry about stolen noses? LOL
Good luck in the contest!
Ron x

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    LOL - thanks so much, Ron. When I was little my dad would always say Let's rub noses like the eskimoses to me. LOL One of my earliest memories of rhyming. Brooke
Comment from barkingdog
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Oh, my. Watch out. Unleashed female aggression. LOL
I love this triolet, Brooke. A poacher, indeed, stealing a kiss is not a crime if love is in the heart. It's wonderfully playful tempo suits the subject.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    LOL - Chloe can get a bit forward - I have several photos of her hugging him where it's not clear if it's a snuggle or a choke hold. LOL Thanks so much, Ellen :-) Brooke
Comment from Righteous Riter
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Good rhythm and flow. Good end rhyming. Good alliteration with will/without...for/falls...when/we're. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message. Nice work.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    Righteous Riter, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from ravenblack
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A stolen kiss is not a crime if love is in a poacher' s heart- such a great line, particularly in association with preschool/grade school Valentine's day...Just as long as the kiss is not followed by a slap.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    LOL - Sawyer has not learned to slap yet. LOL Thanks so much, Ravenblack :-) Brooke
reply by ravenblack on 07-Feb-2014
    It's funny, I can still remember the name of my first "girlfriend" ...and we were both in first grade.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
    My daughter had a little boyfriend in pre-school - because of him and their hugging I ended up with strep throat! LOL