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The Fateful Voyage of Martha Moriary

The sea holds many deadly secrets. I am just one of them...

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Comment from Selina Stambi
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Hello Dean,

Long time no see, my friend! Arrrgh!

Another masterfully horrific rendering from our own terror-monger!

As always, the presentation is spectacular .. and I remembered to turn the sound down!!

Are you snowed in? We are .. ugh!

Sonali :)

gather 'round(comma not required) for a tale I have to spin

Man-O-War(ditto) besieged the Dreadnaught's

battle cry, "She's comin' round to bear(.)"...

The thieves took the good ship(')s booty

hear... a dainty young maiden(')s cry.




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 Comment Written 05-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
    Thank you, Reach, and I have made some of those necessary, suggested edits. Yep, were are not only snowed-in, we are iced in! There's ice everywhere!

    Thanks again for the read, review and editing suggestions...
reply by Selina Stambi on 05-Feb-2014
    WE had our ice in Dec. days before Christmas - no power, heating, phone, internet .. back to pioneer-type entertainment. Actually TALKED with the kids! Keep warm ...
Comment from vapros
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Okay, Dean, another fine horror story, about two ships and a lady (?) and a monster. I'm trying hard to believe it - it's well that you have such a good reputation for veracity, and it is hard to deny the artwork. Always a pleasure to see your stuff.

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 Comment Written 05-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
    Thx, vapros...much obliged, my friend!