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Comment from SteveY
Wow Jewell, who could refuse such an offer? Another beautiful writing full of eloquent poetic language and marvelous descriptions befitting a queen!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Wow Jewell, who could refuse such an offer? Another beautiful writing full of eloquent poetic language and marvelous descriptions befitting a queen!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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ah Steve. you always bless me with your kindness. It's been awhile. I need to take a dip into your portfolio again.
Comment from Jean Lutz
I hope this is prophetic. For too long now, your muse has been in hiding. Like the groundhog, she must have seen her shadow. Time to come out!!!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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I hope this is prophetic. For too long now, your muse has been in hiding. Like the groundhog, she must have seen her shadow. Time to come out!!!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Yes it's been hiding. The visionary art is taking up so much time! It's poetry in pictures. I hope you stop by and take a peek again. (over at facebook) I will try to get them in my portfolio here too! I appreciate you so much.
Comment from robina1978
Excellent picture, that I have seen before, but it also complements your poem very well. You chose the same subject as I did. But wrote about poetry completely different.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Excellent picture, that I have seen before, but it also complements your poem very well. You chose the same subject as I did. But wrote about poetry completely different.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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thank you for stopping in!
Comment from reconciled
wow wee....look who's here poetry....hello pretty lady. Fancy meeting you in a ...place like this, tell me have you always sparkled or is that just the moonlight reflecting your words....-smile- k...let me get out of here before I get arrested.....love you Michael...O..out yellow...sorry...but you know that-
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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wow wee....look who's here poetry....hello pretty lady. Fancy meeting you in a ...place like this, tell me have you always sparkled or is that just the moonlight reflecting your words....-smile- k...let me get out of here before I get arrested.....love you Michael...O..out yellow...sorry...but you know that-
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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I love you Michael. You always make me smile. I think the sun is glistening off my dewy brow after reading these words!
Comment from Gungalo
Refreshed
In the immersion
Of a sugared tune
Ingratiate my senses
Oh kiss me
With poetic lips
This is a great write girl. Your senses look forward to a wondrous night. LOL. As for your title, must be poetic license for there is no such word. LOL
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Refreshed
In the immersion
Of a sugared tune
Ingratiate my senses
Oh kiss me
With poetic lips
This is a great write girl. Your senses look forward to a wondrous night. LOL. As for your title, must be poetic license for there is no such word. LOL
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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haha....I heard someone use it and loved it. Perhaps I should change this title!
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Perhaps you should girl. Hehehe
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long story behind the word, but I changed the title. damn...
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I see and I won't ask the story. LOL
Comment from Helvi2
BIG HELLO My Friend!
Hi Jewell,
I' SOooooo glad to see your still here! It's SO nice to see your work again. Mwah! LOve your poem, but did you mean to title this Mellifluousness? I had to look up the word, it was too BIG for my britches! LOL Your poem is rich with honey filled words and flows as beautifully as ever. Just HAD to give you a six!
:o) Helvi
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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BIG HELLO My Friend!
Hi Jewell,
I' SOooooo glad to see your still here! It's SO nice to see your work again. Mwah! LOve your poem, but did you mean to title this Mellifluousness? I had to look up the word, it was too BIG for my britches! LOL Your poem is rich with honey filled words and flows as beautifully as ever. Just HAD to give you a six!
:o) Helvi
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Hello LOVE! I went directly to your shape poem but I could not review it. :( I miss you! HOW ARE YOU? and thank you for the sixer. You're such a treat.
YES, the word, when I found it, made me want to write about it.
I'm having some finacial problems but otherwise I'm fine! I'm going to send you a copy of an Email I Sent you last year. I don't think you ever got to read it.
The reason you probably couldn't get to my shape poem was beacause there was an error when I posted it. It was suppose to go into a blind contest, but things got fouled up in the editor. I had to ask Tom to put it in the contest for me. I have other poems I wrote this year So feel free to look at one of those. Love YOU! :o) Helvi
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I got to see it, just couldn't review it. There was no option
Comment from 24chas
Hey, Jewell! Imagine my surprise when I saw this piece come up. It's great to read your work again. It was really a nice read, my friend. I loved the whole poem, especially the ending. Well done!
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Hey, Jewell! Imagine my surprise when I saw this piece come up. It's great to read your work again. It was really a nice read, my friend. I loved the whole poem, especially the ending. Well done!
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Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Hey ...fancy meetin' YOU here. We were reviewing each other at the same time. lol Thanks so much.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, poetic visionary, you did an excllent job writing this free verse poem about the call of the verse to the poet's heart. i enjoyed reading it.
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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this is very well written, poetic visionary, you did an excllent job writing this free verse poem about the call of the verse to the poet's heart. i enjoyed reading it.
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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thank you my friend.
