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Comment from NadineM
Jewell, this sounds romantic AND spiritual!! Seems like something written has sparked something within you, bringing pen to paper again, passion a strong driving force. How nice to read your words again. It's been awhile.
Strong use of words like sustenance, and delicate and begs, and refreshed, immersion, integrate, etc!
Now, what exactly inspired this?!!!
Thanks for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Jewell, this sounds romantic AND spiritual!! Seems like something written has sparked something within you, bringing pen to paper again, passion a strong driving force. How nice to read your words again. It's been awhile.
Strong use of words like sustenance, and delicate and begs, and refreshed, immersion, integrate, etc!
Now, what exactly inspired this?!!!
Thanks for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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There is always a touch of Divine love flowing between the lines.I pray my guide is always pure. Passion is not love.It is the drive that keeps love alive.
thank you Nadine. I'm on such a unique path right now.
Comment from DonandVicki
Your words are a flow of exciting passion. I have read this several times and I get so much more than the read before. I would call this erotic poetry but withdrawn at a discreet distance. I wish to become a fan of yours. Don
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Your words are a flow of exciting passion. I have read this several times and I get so much more than the read before. I would call this erotic poetry but withdrawn at a discreet distance. I wish to become a fan of yours. Don
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Oh I am so happy you said that! Thank you for the beautiful garland of six stars!
Comment from rama devi
Delicious smooth-flowing free verse in praise of poetic 'lips'. Enjoyed the smattering of alliteration (especially of S and D) and consonance of S. Especially loved this:
In your eloquent bath
I shall do a splash dance
Within the saturation
Of a treasured treat
and
Golden is your song
A smooth syrup
Which sweetens me
Rolls off the tongue like candy.
Yum!
So lvoely to see you posting again, dear resplendent Jewel.
Hugs, rd
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Delicious smooth-flowing free verse in praise of poetic 'lips'. Enjoyed the smattering of alliteration (especially of S and D) and consonance of S. Especially loved this:
In your eloquent bath
I shall do a splash dance
Within the saturation
Of a treasured treat
and
Golden is your song
A smooth syrup
Which sweetens me
Rolls off the tongue like candy.
Yum!
So lvoely to see you posting again, dear resplendent Jewel.
Hugs, rd
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Hello dear soul! love you and thank you.
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Love you too! ;)
Comment from nancyjam
Lovely and romantic, this free verse flows
Smoothly and languidly down the page.
Full of beautiful phrasing and imagery
As the speaker longs for a poem and love.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Lovely and romantic, this free verse flows
Smoothly and languidly down the page.
Full of beautiful phrasing and imagery
As the speaker longs for a poem and love.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Thank you!
Comment from babylonia
The picture goes so well with the prose. Easy to read and follow. No spaggies do I see. Imagery is excellent. If only it was so easy to write.
Love,
Barbara
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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The picture goes so well with the prose. Easy to read and follow. No spaggies do I see. Imagery is excellent. If only it was so easy to write.
Love,
Barbara
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Thank you!
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you are welcome
Comment from Sasha
It is so good to have you back. I have missed you beautiful poetic words. This is superb. So sweet, smooth, and filled with such beauty it literally warmed my heart. Great work with this one. I enjoyed it immensely.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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It is so good to have you back. I have missed you beautiful poetic words. This is superb. So sweet, smooth, and filled with such beauty it literally warmed my heart. Great work with this one. I enjoyed it immensely.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Thank you! It's good to be back but I just don't get here often enough. My visionary art has taken up all my time!
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
There you are! I was just going to ask you "where are you" and I open the messages and see you. So glad your beauty is once again pouring into our spirits for refreshment. Lovely words, my friend.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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There you are! I was just going to ask you "where are you" and I open the messages and see you. So glad your beauty is once again pouring into our spirits for refreshment. Lovely words, my friend.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Hello dear!
Comment from Diny
love some of your word choices in this one- really deep- really erotic and actually spiritual as well!- You always amaze me... weather by pen or brush your artistic soul shines through so well!- love ya-Di
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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love some of your word choices in this one- really deep- really erotic and actually spiritual as well!- You always amaze me... weather by pen or brush your artistic soul shines through so well!- love ya-Di
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Hello Diny dear. thank you!
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Jewel, I've missed reading your poetry my friend. This is a wonderful pot full of sweetness for the poet to linger. Loved your weaving in this one - as always your posts leave a moments of sweet surrender.
Great work and I sure hope you are back to writing more.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Dear Jewel, I've missed reading your poetry my friend. This is a wonderful pot full of sweetness for the poet to linger. Loved your weaving in this one - as always your posts leave a moments of sweet surrender.
Great work and I sure hope you are back to writing more.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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It's great to be back now and then. Ahhh Sweet surrender, I love that! You may have inspired a new poem.
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:) don't ya love it when that happens...
xo
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here we are again...;)
Comment from Matoshka
OH how sweet it is, that words that caress our hearts and makes us cry with awe at the beauty. Oh the love that is in the words we choose to read. That is perfection of love at the finest. Blessings and hugs
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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OH how sweet it is, that words that caress our hearts and makes us cry with awe at the beauty. Oh the love that is in the words we choose to read. That is perfection of love at the finest. Blessings and hugs
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Thank you! I appreciate such a beautiful review!
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So very welcome, I enjoyed it very much. Blessings
