The Wheel of Miss Fortune
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Comment from chicken scratch love
I don't much care WHAT template you used (I NEVER care); this poem has MAD flow and gorgeous word use! I absolutely loved the "lost soul and I KNOW it" approach! It's kinda like, "Yeah, I KNOW I'm my own worse enemy...so?"
HaaaHaa!! Thanks for the awesome share of your epic writing!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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I don't much care WHAT template you used (I NEVER care); this poem has MAD flow and gorgeous word use! I absolutely loved the "lost soul and I KNOW it" approach! It's kinda like, "Yeah, I KNOW I'm my own worse enemy...so?"
HaaaHaa!! Thanks for the awesome share of your epic writing!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much, chicken scratch love (great name!). Yes, a lot of people don't care, but some have asked me to identify the forms, so I'm kind of doing that for them.
Anyway, I really appreciate the green plus sixer from you, and your very kind review. You've nailed the conceit with a ball-peen hammer, too. That's EXACTLY what I meant be it. :) Kudos!
David
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Oh, ABSOLUTELY! I definitely APPRECIATED the notes...I DO want that knowledge! I guess my point was just a bit "over-the-top" now that I'm reading over it...
I tend to do that sometimes : D
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No, you were absolutely right about the notes. It's probably not necessary, but it does save time for those who have been asking. Thanks!
David
Comment from 24chas
First off, I love the title. Secondly, the piece itself is the usual well-written and perfect poem. That spinning heart is something to watch out for allright.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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First off, I love the title. Secondly, the piece itself is the usual well-written and perfect poem. That spinning heart is something to watch out for allright.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much, Chas! I appreciate the sixer, my friend.
Comment from padumachitta
Hello. You eh, your last lines are always so spot on.
Her expos© destroyed it, but I salvaged every part,
So scatter to avoid it when I start my spinning heart.
By the way, all i could see was Vanna White...I guess that shows my age...and my inclination...:-)
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Hello. You eh, your last lines are always so spot on.
Her expos© destroyed it, but I salvaged every part,
So scatter to avoid it when I start my spinning heart.
By the way, all i could see was Vanna White...I guess that shows my age...and my inclination...:-)
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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I was picturing her, too, my friend, but probably for different reasons. ;-) Thank you very much! David
