Sharing
a whimsical minute poem147 total reviews
Comment from L.A.Matthies
I really enjoyed this minute poem, Brooke. I've recently tried this form myself as I love the challenge of attempting something new :) Thanks for always sharing your knowledge on FS.
That Daddy should share because Mommy's know about these things ...smiles :)Linda
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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I really enjoyed this minute poem, Brooke. I've recently tried this form myself as I love the challenge of attempting something new :) Thanks for always sharing your knowledge on FS.
That Daddy should share because Mommy's know about these things ...smiles :)Linda
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from rod007
These are simple words, but so effective in conveying the message of Dad's greedy designs on that pudding. I don't blame Dad. It looks absolutely delicious, and his son did have a good share of it. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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These are simple words, but so effective in conveying the message of Dad's greedy designs on that pudding. I don't blame Dad. It looks absolutely delicious, and his son did have a good share of it. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Rod, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from handmadecards
Ah, such a simple but very clever minute poem. It reads so easily, the words just skip along. Well done, a delight to read.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Ah, such a simple but very clever minute poem. It reads so easily, the words just skip along. Well done, a delight to read.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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handmadecards, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Akanksha Mahajan
Ha ha ha !!! A true happening with all of us. Actually we must share thing but there are people who don't even look that we are sharing things with them. In this poem the little child becomes confused that whether to share (told by his mama) or to not(told by his daddy).
Thank you for SHARING. :)
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Ha ha ha !!! A true happening with all of us. Actually we must share thing but there are people who don't even look that we are sharing things with them. In this poem the little child becomes confused that whether to share (told by his mama) or to not(told by his daddy).
Thank you for SHARING. :)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Akanksha, thank you so very much :-) I'm so glad you laughed. Brooke
Comment from humpwhistle
Already Andy is playing the long-suffering father. Playing, of course. But it's a good role. Reminds me of Larry-the-Youngest's woebegone dad.
Your poem makes a fitting, whimsical caption for this catured whisical moment.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Already Andy is playing the long-suffering father. Playing, of course. But it's a good role. Reminds me of Larry-the-Youngest's woebegone dad.
Your poem makes a fitting, whimsical caption for this catured whisical moment.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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You totally get the role Andy is playing. :-) Thank you so much, Lee. Brooke
Comment from The Death
Haha...as they say-"Follow what you preach". :)
Has this really happened?...LOL
Kids are like this only. They have so many questions and the curiosity never ends. :)
Well written piece! :)
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Haha...as they say-"Follow what you preach". :)
Has this really happened?...LOL
Kids are like this only. They have so many questions and the curiosity never ends. :)
Well written piece! :)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Anupam, thank you. Andy has never liked to share food, but when it comes to his son, this is just play acting. He is a sucker for Sawyer. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from Domino 2
I'm surprised you didn't enter the current 'minute poem' prompt, Brooke - especially as you're such a whizz at the form.
Excellent and fun write, but I'm sure Daddy did really give Sawyer a taste. :-)
Nice one!
Best wishes, Ted
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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I'm surprised you didn't enter the current 'minute poem' prompt, Brooke - especially as you're such a whizz at the form.
Excellent and fun write, but I'm sure Daddy did really give Sawyer a taste. :-)
Nice one!
Best wishes, Ted
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much, Ted. I have not entered a single daily prompt since they made them blind contests, and I never will. And of course Daddy gave him a taste - he dotes on the child :-) Brooke
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I KNEW he would, Brooke. :-) xx
Comment from Sanku
a great photo! the expression in the faces of father and son is just delightful!Sawyer is absolutely right as to feel that daddy also should obey mamma's rule.the expert use of this form has given an extra zing to even otherwise lively poem.you have an amazing imagination ,only someone who has poetry in her blood can come up with such beautiful lines.loved it .
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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a great photo! the expression in the faces of father and son is just delightful!Sawyer is absolutely right as to feel that daddy also should obey mamma's rule.the expert use of this form has given an extra zing to even otherwise lively poem.you have an amazing imagination ,only someone who has poetry in her blood can come up with such beautiful lines.loved it .
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much, Sanku :-) Brooke
Comment from robina1978
Long time since I saw this form of poetry. Of course you wrote it well and an other excellent photo from Sawyer. He share and he does not:)
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Long time since I saw this form of poetry. Of course you wrote it well and an other excellent photo from Sawyer. He share and he does not:)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much, Ine :-) Brooke
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
It would be a minute lost if the meter were; the meter makes it. An effective rhyme scheme such as you've used here is also advantageous. He's learning when, and when not, that rule applies. Kenny
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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It would be a minute lost if the meter were; the meter makes it. An effective rhyme scheme such as you've used here is also advantageous. He's learning when, and when not, that rule applies. Kenny
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Kenny, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
