Sharing
a whimsical minute poem147 total reviews
Comment from Aussie
I did laugh at the look on Andy's face - two spoons are better than one. LOL. Whimsical is the right word for your poem. Most enjoyable Nana.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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I did laugh at the look on Andy's face - two spoons are better than one. LOL. Whimsical is the right word for your poem. Most enjoyable Nana.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Kay, thank you so very much :-) Andy loves to mug for the camera :-) Brooke
Comment from in777wr#
This was a well written minute poem. The picture compliments the poem well. The message in this poem is clear. The rhyming scheme is consistent. Well written.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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This was a well written minute poem. The picture compliments the poem well. The message in this poem is clear. The rhyming scheme is consistent. Well written.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Arthur, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Titanx9
It's hard to tell what Sawyer's dad is thinking as he looks a bit askance at the child helping himself to the goodies. Your daughter's a great photographer and manages to get some very good "guarded moments" photos that only skilled photographers seem to be able to do. This is one that captures such a moment in time picture.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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It's hard to tell what Sawyer's dad is thinking as he looks a bit askance at the child helping himself to the goodies. Your daughter's a great photographer and manages to get some very good "guarded moments" photos that only skilled photographers seem to be able to do. This is one that captures such a moment in time picture.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Titan, thank you so much :-) I agree, Miranda is really good at this :-) Brooke
Comment from RGstar
A nice little family tribute. A small poem but well define structure which is adhered to.
A special moment in which can be captured but once.
You words do justice.
A balanced combination.
Good write.
RGstar
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A nice little family tribute. A small poem but well define structure which is adhered to.
A special moment in which can be captured but once.
You words do justice.
A balanced combination.
Good write.
RGstar
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
Comment from A Matter Of Words
How fun is this....Great picture to go along with a great poem...All the requirements are in place for this minute work. Great work, Brooke.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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How fun is this....Great picture to go along with a great poem...All the requirements are in place for this minute work. Great work, Brooke.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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thanks so much, Matter of Words :-) Brooke
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You're very welcome, Brooke.
Comment from TOMORAL
Lovely minute poem perfectly written and me think we have a winner in this contest. Love the picture of son and dad and fun time. This is perfection!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Lovely minute poem perfectly written and me think we have a winner in this contest. Love the picture of son and dad and fun time. This is perfection!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Tomoral, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
It's funny how those things work. When my mom would swear or something she would always say: Do as I say not as I do. It bring a whole new light on wanting your kids to be better than yourself. Great job
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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It's funny how those things work. When my mom would swear or something she would always say: Do as I say not as I do. It bring a whole new light on wanting your kids to be better than yourself. Great job
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Experiencing Liphe, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
A good, amusing poem, perfect in every way. A minute poem with a good story. I'm surprised it is not in the contest. Great picture. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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A good, amusing poem, perfect in every way. A minute poem with a good story. I'm surprised it is not in the contest. Great picture. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Dorothy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from GracieAnn
Brooke, I really like this poetic device. It works well with the concept you refer to and reminds us about the old saying, "what is good for the goose, is good for the gander. LOL Nice. :0 GracieAnn
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Brooke, I really like this poetic device. It works well with the concept you refer to and reminds us about the old saying, "what is good for the goose, is good for the gander. LOL Nice. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
Comment from Martin Chan
This poetry "Sharing" is a nicely composed Minute poem conforming to the writings of the minute poem with perfect rhyme scheme with strict iambic meter.
I like this children's poetry.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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This poetry "Sharing" is a nicely composed Minute poem conforming to the writings of the minute poem with perfect rhyme scheme with strict iambic meter.
I like this children's poetry.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Martin, thank you so very much, my friend. I'm honored by your exceptional rating :-) Brooke
