Sharing
a whimsical minute poem147 total reviews
Comment from Bryana
Very original and cute poem. I love it.
The last stanza made laugh specially the
last three lines...
Your mama's is wrong
Don't cross the line
What's mine is mine.
Always a pleasure to read your work dear Brooke.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Very original and cute poem. I love it.
The last stanza made laugh specially the
last three lines...
Your mama's is wrong
Don't cross the line
What's mine is mine.
Always a pleasure to read your work dear Brooke.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Bryana, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Connie C
Cute picture, Brooke, with a cute and very whimsical poem. Nice rhyme throughout this minute poem and, as always, a pleasure to read.
Connie
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Cute picture, Brooke, with a cute and very whimsical poem. Nice rhyme throughout this minute poem and, as always, a pleasure to read.
Connie
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Thanks so very much, Connie :-) Brooke
Comment from Jacq77
I really enjoyed reading this, and the photo is a hoot - brilliant one to complement your words. Sharing is a wonderful thing for children to learn and get used to, but we adults sometimes need a reminder in that lesson too. Seems like Dad does here...
Sorry I'm not qualified to comment on the technical aspects.
Good one!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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I really enjoyed reading this, and the photo is a hoot - brilliant one to complement your words. Sharing is a wonderful thing for children to learn and get used to, but we adults sometimes need a reminder in that lesson too. Seems like Dad does here...
Sorry I'm not qualified to comment on the technical aspects.
Good one!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much, Jacq77 :-) Brooke
Comment from Lovewritingstuff
This is a poem that children will enjoy reading, it is also fun and holds a message. The picture is funny and complements it very well. I liked particularly the last stanza. Quite original.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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This is a poem that children will enjoy reading, it is also fun and holds a message. The picture is funny and complements it very well. I liked particularly the last stanza. Quite original.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Lovewritingstuff, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from livelylinda
Brooke: delightful as always with another fabulous picture of Sawyer learning another lesson about life. Let the little "sponge" continue to soak up everything he needs to know; such a cutie. Good write. Linda
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Brooke: delightful as always with another fabulous picture of Sawyer learning another lesson about life. Let the little "sponge" continue to soak up everything he needs to know; such a cutie. Good write. Linda
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Linda, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from 3boysrule
This is a very cute and funny poem. Dad's aren't so great at the sharing thing :-) Of course, what a perfect picture! Gave me a laugh.
Dee
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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This is a very cute and funny poem. Dad's aren't so great at the sharing thing :-) Of course, what a perfect picture! Gave me a laugh.
Dee
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Dee, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Cumbrianlass
First of all, I've never heard of a minute poem (I don't think) until now. A fun post, Brooke, with a line that reminded me of one my mum used to say:
"What's yours is mine, and what's mine's my own."
Can't lose, really! LOL!
Wonderful pic, and the prefect poem to go with it. The look on Dad's face is priceless!
Av
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First of all, I've never heard of a minute poem (I don't think) until now. A fun post, Brooke, with a line that reminded me of one my mum used to say:
"What's yours is mine, and what's mine's my own."
Can't lose, really! LOL!
Wonderful pic, and the prefect poem to go with it. The look on Dad's face is priceless!
Av
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I really enjoyed reading your poem. My class this year is the first class I have ever had that knows nothing about sharing. I always provide the class supplies because only a few of my students have supplies, so they are all the same. I hear "he has my crayon or he touched my desk." All day. I am amazed at this. Of course, you can't learn to share unless you feel you have something to share.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. My class this year is the first class I have ever had that knows nothing about sharing. I always provide the class supplies because only a few of my students have supplies, so they are all the same. I hear "he has my crayon or he touched my desk." All day. I am amazed at this. Of course, you can't learn to share unless you feel you have something to share.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Barbara, thank you so much. I'm sure when they have things of their own for the first time it is much harder to share than for kids who have everything they could ever wish for. My daughter notices that with the little girl she nannies. She has absolutely no eagerness for Hanukkah or birthday gifts in the way most kids get all excited. When she wants something she gets it, no matter the time of year. She appreciates a present once she gets it, but she is not making lists and waiting for the day to come, and if Sawyer comes to visit her, she doesn't care if he wants her to share. This is not because she is more highly evolved - it's because she knows she'll always have more than enough. Brooke
Comment from Helvi2
Hi Brooke,
Very Cute and most likely true too! I never realized a minute poem had 60 syllables. Of course I've never written one either. You didn't have any trouble with the 60 syllables nor change of rhyme in every verse. Nice job My Friend and comical to boot! I thoroughly enjoyed it!
:o) Helvi
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Hi Brooke,
Very Cute and most likely true too! I never realized a minute poem had 60 syllables. Of course I've never written one either. You didn't have any trouble with the 60 syllables nor change of rhyme in every verse. Nice job My Friend and comical to boot! I thoroughly enjoyed it!
:o) Helvi
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Helvi, thank you so very much :-) I truly appreciate your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This is quite a catchy little poem, Brooke, and I feel as if I could almost sing to it. Tell Andy I said bean sprouts are very good for you! It sounds like those boys are forming a union! LOL Giddy
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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This is quite a catchy little poem, Brooke, and I feel as if I could almost sing to it. Tell Andy I said bean sprouts are very good for you! It sounds like those boys are forming a union! LOL Giddy
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Giddy, thank you so much, my friend. Andy actually does share with this boy :-) Brooke
