Writing Prompt Entries 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Almost Bedtime"The clue is in the title!
5 total reviews
Comment from EMB
Haha! As I read this, I was thinking that it really wasn't going anywhere when it came to dealing with an object or situation, but I was pleasantly surprised how wrong I was in the end. Great job! :)
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Haha! As I read this, I was thinking that it really wasn't going anywhere when it came to dealing with an object or situation, but I was pleasantly surprised how wrong I was in the end. Great job! :)
Comment Written 07-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Hi :) Thank you for your great comments :) I'm glad that you enjoyed this short piece. Kindest regards, Debra
Comment from padumachitta
Hello. a very sweet well writen story. I love the last line. It is refeshing to read of a good childhood.
Godd luck in the contest.
May you be well.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Hello. a very sweet well writen story. I love the last line. It is refeshing to read of a good childhood.
Godd luck in the contest.
May you be well.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much for your lovely review and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards to you :)
Comment from Delores J. Howard
I never saw a child who loved bed-time. Wonderful little story that all children "and" adults can relate to. Verse 3: Would a little boy say bedtime is "lovely"? Not in America--maybe in England. This was really cute and a fun read.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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I never saw a child who loved bed-time. Wonderful little story that all children "and" adults can relate to. Verse 3: Would a little boy say bedtime is "lovely"? Not in America--maybe in England. This was really cute and a fun read.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Thank you Delores for your lovely review.... I agree that 'lovely' is probably the wrong choice of word for a 3yr old boy describing bedtime! - thank you for picking up on that :) Kindest regards, Debra
Comment from adewpearl
maybe mommy will forget - Mommy, since it is used instead of her name
I love the little boy's logic that Daddy is way older than he is so why hasn't he outgrown sleeping with Mommy LOL
Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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maybe mommy will forget - Mommy, since it is used instead of her name
I love the little boy's logic that Daddy is way older than he is so why hasn't he outgrown sleeping with Mommy LOL
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 29-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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Hi Brooke, thank you for your kind review and for picking up the error :) I appreciate it! Kindest regards...
Comment from Nosha17
Very cute, enjoyable story-bedtime from a child's perspective. You have made good use of language in your narrative and descriptions and it read well from start to finish. Faye
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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Very cute, enjoyable story-bedtime from a child's perspective. You have made good use of language in your narrative and descriptions and it read well from start to finish. Faye
Comment Written 29-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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Hi Faye :) Thank you for your great review, I appreciate your comments :) Kindest regards...
