Comment from MagKing

Excellent

I really do not comprehend this poem nor do I understand it.
I just couldn't conceive it all.
I tried and tried, rereading it over and over.
Perhaps you could explain it to me? If not I might change the rating to a less.
The five I gave was to encourage you to explain it to me.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014

Well, unless your a female cop, here goes..
The Imp is me teased as can be by my witchen
friend, Miss Fancy of Pancy Nancy!
The Butter is my temperature when lavically erupting.
And of course the incident sparked my gift of 'The Holy ghost" and when that happens my friend, I feel the need to exceed with a brokening or a choking or whatever?
Thanks,
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Comment from chicken scratch love

Excellent

I have changed this rating, because I failed to see that this is a chapter book and that what I had read was merely a portion of what you have available. My apologies. So sorry.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014

Thanks my new friend.
And my pen is more violent
then my ability to rewrite
a fight with fists of blood
upon thy copeth face!
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Comment from robina1978

Excellent

I am so sorry you lost your son, that is the worst thing that can happen to a parent. Your poem had an excellent layout but I found it hard to follow with all the abbreviations.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014

Thanks "Robina,"
"My newest book written in Old English{College tech poetry] is filled with that...
Just my adherent style."
Thanks and keep the "Writing Candle" burning!
See?
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Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

Another interesting post that makes for an interesting read. It took me a while to get used to this format, but I read it better now :)
I will protect the innocent ad I don't --- and I don't ???

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014

"and" ..
"As for the cussing, well its actually used in literature? Thanks,
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Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

Hello there,

I find this a very interesting read. I wish to offer my congrats on your rankings in the novel category. Bless you and the Hand that guides you.

I have a couple of things I noticed,


no mace OR club

innocent AND I don't

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014

Thanks Miss Cajun,
"And since I never check my 'Novel Ratings'
{usually short script,} what tis it my 'Cajun
Queen of New Orleans?'
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reply by Cajungirl on 28-Jan-2014

I see you are ranked 38. I am very proud of you. I haven't mustard the nerve to start one yet. I have been steady writing stories and was proud I just won a contest.

Comment from Preston McWhorter

Excellent

Hi, Richard
The "Hot Buttered Imp" is amazing free verse poetry with not so good structure with its story impeded by my not being able to tell what the imp was, hero? or villain? The same goes for the cop due to the proliferation of antecedent figurative language which makes the details of this morality play unclear
to me. Genius is not always clear to the average.
Your friend,
Preston

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014

Well first things first Mr. Preston and yes, of course you and
I travel different 'Vectors' which of course,s 'Spoctologically, Spoctolocical Logically logic,' according to the Leonard Nimoy theory based on his amazing characterization of the alien 'Spock,' which of cause according to the 'TREKKIES' is abouloutly, postitutly "Enterprising!"
Thanks and of course this piece is true and as far as I could see, 'The Vacationing Cop' was the Victim and of course the 'Imp' was me!!!
Thanks,

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reply by Preston McWhorter on 28-Jan-2014

Of course life does not have to be reasonable, sensible, understandable or true but poetry? if not the only question to be reviewed is can I go with the flow?