Comment from JB Lynn

Excellent

Very clever rhyme between "do" and "debut".

"and if no hummingbirds come round,/ I look for butterflies." - I loved this! Probably my favorite part.

Once again, you've crafted a loving poem that warms the soul. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014

J B Lynn, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

Oh how sweet. I like the examples
you give for choices we have when
things don't always turn out how we'd wish.
Agood lesson for life. But when someone you love is apart thee are really no substitutes.
Great rhyme and meter and another sweet picture to enhance your words. Nancy

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 Comment Written 26-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014

Thank you so much, Nancy :-) Brooke

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Brooke, lovely post with some loving messages threaded through it.
Skilled write as always and once more you are sharing some extra smiles blending with nuggets of wisdom.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen


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 Comment Written 26-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014

Maureen, thank you so much :-) Brooke