Nothing is a Substitute
rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6163 total reviews
Comment from sweetthanesue
aw...all the good thingssue in life we can substitude but when it comes to loved ones never the same... sweet poem with a sweet Sawer having the time of his life..my how quickly wee ones grow....
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aw...all the good thingssue in life we can substitude but when it comes to loved ones never the same... sweet poem with a sweet Sawer having the time of his life..my how quickly wee ones grow....
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Sue, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Angel Blessings
Very descriptive poem!. The reader gets a picture in their mind of exactly what you are describing!. great presentation. thank you for your poem!
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Very descriptive poem!. The reader gets a picture in their mind of exactly what you are describing!. great presentation. thank you for your poem!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Angel Blessings, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from jadapenn
Hi Brooke, this is an extremely visual poem. I love the way there's a positive for every negative. Except when the poem says there's no substitute for you. Nice rhyming and an enjoyable read. luv jada
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Hi Brooke, this is an extremely visual poem. I love the way there's a positive for every negative. Except when the poem says there's no substitute for you. Nice rhyming and an enjoyable read. luv jada
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Jada, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Just Pete
Another masterfully written poem. Wonderful rhyme (as always) that makes reading your poems such a pleasure. The last stanza is so perfect.
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Another masterfully written poem. Wonderful rhyme (as always) that makes reading your poems such a pleasure. The last stanza is so perfect.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Pete, thank you so much for your encouraging and generous review :-) Brooke
Comment from amahra
I read this twice. Lovely poem for saying,"only want you want will do. Another great poem, Brooke. And it's always a pleasure seeing Sawyer.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014
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I read this twice. Lovely poem for saying,"only want you want will do. Another great poem, Brooke. And it's always a pleasure seeing Sawyer.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014
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amahra, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from rjuselius
aaawwww:) this has beautiful imagery and a touch of light-hearted play. i love this one!
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
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aaawwww:) this has beautiful imagery and a touch of light-hearted play. i love this one!
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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rebekka, thank you so very much for your encouraging and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from chasennov
'Nothing Is A Substitute.' A very nice little poem you have created here, Brooke. It always amazes me how children can compensate for different things, if what they really wanted is not available. They make do! Well done.
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'Nothing Is A Substitute.' A very nice little poem you have created here, Brooke. It always amazes me how children can compensate for different things, if what they really wanted is not available. They make do! Well done.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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chasennov, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are always very welcome, Brooke.
Comment from His Grayness
Dear Brooke: absolutely delightful in all ways! What a sweet and fun ... lighthearted work with a lovely photo and all so very entertaining! Loved it! Vance
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Dear Brooke: absolutely delightful in all ways! What a sweet and fun ... lighthearted work with a lovely photo and all so very entertaining! Loved it! Vance
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Vance, thank you so much for your most generous and thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from tbacha58
There seems to be an antidote
for all that makes me blue,
but nothing is a substitute
when I'm apart from you.
That is a beautiful poem, wishing for the future spring and summer, a delightful poem, especially with Sawyer playing with the summer sand.
Enjoyed reading your wishes. Hugs and love to both of you. Terry
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014
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There seems to be an antidote
for all that makes me blue,
but nothing is a substitute
when I'm apart from you.
That is a beautiful poem, wishing for the future spring and summer, a delightful poem, especially with Sawyer playing with the summer sand.
Enjoyed reading your wishes. Hugs and love to both of you. Terry
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014
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Terry, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a beautiful and uplifting poem from the author in this piece of writing. I am happy to see yet another wonderful picture of Sawyer at play once again.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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This is a beautiful and uplifting poem from the author in this piece of writing. I am happy to see yet another wonderful picture of Sawyer at play once again.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Tomes, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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My pleasure
