Ezekiel Had Half a Smile
quatrains in 8/6/8/6 pure whimsy163 total reviews
Comment from MM lives on :)
Hey Brooke...you got me with this fancy poetic work
quatrains in 8/6/8/6 pure whimsy / wow !:)
anyways the poem is a delight as always the half smile cutie pie, ha!@
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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Hey Brooke...you got me with this fancy poetic work
quatrains in 8/6/8/6 pure whimsy / wow !:)
anyways the poem is a delight as always the half smile cutie pie, ha!@
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much, Christopher :-) Brooke
Comment from Merriweather
Again adewpearl, you have created a very special poem. How instinctive you are to take an very ordinary but meaningful attitude and elevate it to extraordinary.
What a beautiful smile on Sawyer, and what a beautiful poem. Your rhyme scheme is flawless and very well crafted.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Again adewpearl, you have created a very special poem. How instinctive you are to take an very ordinary but meaningful attitude and elevate it to extraordinary.
What a beautiful smile on Sawyer, and what a beautiful poem. Your rhyme scheme is flawless and very well crafted.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Merriweather, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Just Pete
Thank you once again, for another enjoyable read. If only we all recognized the value of a smile, our day would lose so much of its stress. Another great addition to yor collection.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014
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Thank you once again, for another enjoyable read. If only we all recognized the value of a smile, our day would lose so much of its stress. Another great addition to yor collection.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014
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Pete, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Sasha
That half smile could charm the pants off a telephone pole...not sure where that came from but I am sure it could do it. What a delightful poem and a marvelous photo go go with hit. Sawyer does have some awesome expressions,but I have to agree, his half smile is one of the best.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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That half smile could charm the pants off a telephone pole...not sure where that came from but I am sure it could do it. What a delightful poem and a marvelous photo go go with hit. Sawyer does have some awesome expressions,but I have to agree, his half smile is one of the best.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Valerie, I so agree. LOL Thanks so much, my friend :-) Brooke
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He really is so precious and amazingly photogenic. Quite the cutie too.
Comment from amahra
Ok, is this bd bd rhyme? Anyway I liked the combination of the rhyming. Your rhythm always flow well. And little man is doing his thing as usual...and that's being cute.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Ok, is this bd bd rhyme? Anyway I liked the combination of the rhyming. Your rhythm always flow well. And little man is doing his thing as usual...and that's being cute.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Thank you, Amahra. It uses abcb rhyme where the second and fourth lines rhyme. Brooke :-)
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good use of the abcb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good alliteration with had/half...had/he...world/would...smile/see. Good rhythm and flow. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Good use of the abcb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good alliteration with had/half...had/he...world/would...smile/see. Good rhythm and flow. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Righteous Riter, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from krys123
A beautiful written poem about a smile that could be and as it is well defined by the picture which complements the poem and the poem is definitely complements the picture.
Boy, Sawyer looked so cute in that picture and I can't tell if it's a devilishly cute smile are just a whimsical one. Thank you so much Brooke for sharing this with everyone including myself. May you have a good one and God bless.
Alex
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014
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A beautiful written poem about a smile that could be and as it is well defined by the picture which complements the poem and the poem is definitely complements the picture.
Boy, Sawyer looked so cute in that picture and I can't tell if it's a devilishly cute smile are just a whimsical one. Thank you so much Brooke for sharing this with everyone including myself. May you have a good one and God bless.
Alex
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014
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Alex, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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Your so sincerely welcome Brooke
Comment from barkingdog
Sawyer's eyes are beautiful in half-smile mode. He's such a cheery fellow.(Oh, I know that he has his moments.)
These rhyming quatrains flow smoothly with good use of enjambment and an even tempo.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Sawyer's eyes are beautiful in half-smile mode. He's such a cheery fellow.(Oh, I know that he has his moments.)
These rhyming quatrains flow smoothly with good use of enjambment and an even tempo.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Ellen, thank you so much. He is very cheery - today's video has him giggling wildly as he feeds his cat with a spoonful of his yogurt while all the time his nose is gushing snot. LOL The poor thing has his first cold but that isn't getting him down :-) Brooke
Comment from emrpoems
Though deemed to be commentary / philosophical, written eloquently and in a heartfelt way, it affords an enjoyable read.
Quatrains in 8/6/8/6 with abab rhymes boast an easy flow of words and a good use of alliteration throughout
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014
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Though deemed to be commentary / philosophical, written eloquently and in a heartfelt way, it affords an enjoyable read.
Quatrains in 8/6/8/6 with abab rhymes boast an easy flow of words and a good use of alliteration throughout
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014
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emrpoems, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from allborn66
This is an adorable poem. You communicate the theme well. The form and rhyming scheme enhance the piece. The word choice paints a vivid picture.
Barbara
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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This is an adorable poem. You communicate the theme well. The form and rhyming scheme enhance the piece. The word choice paints a vivid picture.
Barbara
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Barbara, thank you so much :-) Brooke
